Subsistence: review
I'm a little torn about this short story. The writing style was extremely wordy. There were plenty of run on sentences, and lots of flowery language. It read like something that might have been written a very long time ago, but that didn't really help the piece. I enjoyed the poetic imagery this story used and would have enjoyed the story itself a lot more if it were more comprehensible. There were quite a few phrases that I didn't get and some words that may have been misspelled, or at least very uncommon.
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