I got to be honest with you I didn't really get it. I don't know if this was on purpose or if it was just my computer but the video was only viewable for the first 30 seconds. The rest of the time it was just a blank grey screen. The audio was really hard to make out so I really didn't get a feel for what was supposed to happen. Maybe try a real person's voice for the dialouge. I would look into the video issue. It could have very well been my computer but it would never hurt to check. Good luck!
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A review of Albino Santa Copby JasonSpencer on 02/14/2011This was really well done. I was amazed on how professional the animation looked. At the end I noticed in the notes that this was done with paper cut outs? Really? Wow good job man really! I thought the story worked well too. The Albino Santa thing was out of left field but that added a little something that I liked. Looking forward to seeing more of your work. Thanks!... read
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