Review of: Damaged 

reviewed by SuperFrostyMan on 03/24/2004
Too Good To Be Damaged
I think this is a wonderful read. I love how it starts with the introduction to the characters. I also love how at first you are not too sure what is going on and then it justs clicks a little later. I also though the ending was great with an explosive climax. The only thing I did not like was some of the lines. They were great do not get me wrong, but some of them were...cheesey. Like on page 109 when Amanda says, "Here goes a few million of the taxpayers dollars." That is just my main problem with movies. Some of the lines are just chessey. I think when a character speaks it should be like when a real person speaks and that is probably why I love only certain screenplay writers. Everything else though was great.
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