A very nice looking film...Really loved the location and your lighting was outstanding.
Story wise, it was very interesting, although you may want to look at multiple locations and spreading out the converstation over multiple scenes...Draws out the drama and increases the value of the film.
What killed you was the acting...It was really bad...Not sure what kind of experience they had or if time hurt you but the piece had a tremendous amount of power, over the top, theatre style acting was not need for this.
Keep up the good work.
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A review of A Lucky Strikeby ccharroux on 05/20/2008This film was beautifully shot. Camera composition was outstanding, special effects (explosions) fantastic, acting was terrific. The only problem for me was the story itself...I know it is so hard to create a short film, writing a story that really has a beginning, middle and an end can be almost impossible in a 10 minute time frame...This story did nothing for me... I think... read
A review of The Holiday Houseby ccharroux on 07/25/2007I think the film was fine, nothing special about it and not sure why it is making it into the film festival...Everything was satisfactory and nothing really special for me. The editing was probably the best thing in the film. The acting was average and the writing was just fine...The set was interesting, but I was hoping for so much more.
A review of Fluffyby ccharroux on 12/30/2003I loved this film! This film had a very cute story and the work of the lead actor was terrific. The shooting of the film was flawless, production wise it was perfect. Good lighting, good sound, pacing was good, it was a very; very good film. Nice work. Nice work, Nice work.