Bramble Hill script really made the movie run in front of my eyes as I read it. I enjoined reading it as all the small details were brought out so well that it was easy to understand what the writer was trying to say.
I also enjoined the story-line. At first it seemed like every other scary witch story but as it went one I discovered it is not so.
Although there are some things that could need some more work. For example, at start we see how Ashley is this bossy girl with a potty mouth and basically stays like this trough out the story. So would like to see some more development there.
As it was a horror movie it did not so much struck me as one. The only horrorish part for me was when Doug died. I think it is because all the other deaths that happened were not so much important as the characters were not introduced to us or at least I did not feel for them.
Overall I think it was a great read and with a little bit of more work it is for sure big screen material. Looking forward reading/watching your movies.
Very well and professionally written.
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A review of Viva Los Donaldby Rommi on 07/03/2011Viva Los Donald made me think that someone forced you to make this and you did not want to. The acting was done in one shot and later just smashed together. The story line was weak to be polite. It was a pain for me to watch and a total waist of 5 minutes. -
A review of Ten Thousand Shadows: Human Trialby Rommi on 07/03/2011This movie got me confused if the guy in the movie was doing all this or someone else. Also it was not exactly scary for me as I could not understand the characters also we see that sort of gun pointing and threatening in all movies nowadays. What I liked about this was the way how it was filmed with a webcam also the montage with all the repeat cadres and the way they went... read
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