Other Reviews by Piermanhill 43

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  what are you fighting
  A review of Why We Fight (Post Bin Laden Edition)
  by Piermanhill on 06/10/2011
  That is the strangest story I read these past two months, did I like it? It was interesting as the porn industry is rarely a subject a writer chooses as the background story. I’m not sure I understood what the all concept was! Were you depicting the life of two couples or are you pointing a finger at the puritan and hypocrite Americans way of life and took the army to vehicle... That is the strangest story I read these past two months, did I like it? It was interesting as the porn industry is rarely a subject a writer chooses as the background story. I’m not sure I understood what the all concept was! Were you depicting the life of two couples or are you pointing a finger at the puritan and hypocrite Americans way of life and took the army to vehicle your idea? In any case, I read the entire script sometime a bit bored, sometime with a laugh…Then I went back reading your bio, a funny one too…So maybe I shouldn’t make any criticism has it seems you had a great time writing that script and after that it is what counts the most. read
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  Ashland fire brigade
  A review of Ashland
  by Piermanhill on 05/26/2011
  The opening sequence grabbed my interest as I was impressed not only by the description of the main character (all characters are well described) but by the style and structure which is good through the entire script. One thing I have to figure out, I never saw before, is the character/character (Paul/Mickey) you use from time to time. I’ll have to do some research as it’s... The opening sequence grabbed my interest as I was impressed not only by the description of the main character (all characters are well described) but by the style and structure which is good through the entire script. One thing I have to figure out, I never saw before, is the character/character (Paul/Mickey) you use from time to time. I’ll have to do some research as it’s always good to learn from the other writers.
  The story itself: Keith arrives to the campus, meet is roommate, I got an idea of what the campus looks like, got the idea of Keith’s background but by page 20 I’m still waiting for something to happen and that is my critic about your story nothing much happen that kept me motivated. Yankee vs confederate, city boy vs country boy, a fire brigade as background why not…. but not much intrigue in that, not a romance either. A lot a characters, sometime useless.. like Toby. Why didn’t you use him more efficiently?
  I don’t say is a bad story only it needs a something more that will have kept me fascinated. read
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  An enjoyable Alien
  A review of I am Alien
  by Piermanhill on 03/05/2011
  I was afraid of another science–fiction voyage filled with special effects and war battles but to the contrary i enjoyed this pleasant and surprising ride into your original plays. I read the entire script in one go, well written, the story flows nicely, very easy to read. The characters are well described, Anthony the alien, is likeable and the dialogues seems real. The structure... I was afraid of another science–fiction voyage filled with special effects and war battles but to the contrary i enjoyed this pleasant and surprising ride into your original plays. I read the entire script in one go, well written, the story flows nicely, very easy to read. The characters are well described, Anthony the alien, is likeable and the dialogues seems real. The structure of the script is good, I guess the reason the story was so easy to read. I was however a little disappointed with the end, I would have expected a more challenging conflict between Anthony and the collective but again I don’t know how I will have managed the ending… so congratulation I find your story well entertaining and fun to read. read