Review of: Knock 

reviewed by shadesdown2001 on 07/21/2006
shadesdown2001
Whats the Point?
Right from the beginning, the scene was way to long for the man walking to the motel. Where are the speaking roles? They stopped making silent films in the early 1900's. The clip did not have a plot. What was the purpose of the man in the motel? Was he a drug dealer? Was he selling candy? Was he taking up donations? The box on the bed when he opened it, only had money in it, nothing else was shown to explain the purpose of the exchange of money. Why did he have a bathtub full of dead people? This clip needs alot of work in my opinion to make it to the competition.

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