Review of: "Letters from somewhere; letters from somewhen" - Letter 1
reviewed by Nekowrites on 03/01/2009
Where to now
I am not sure where to start. The story was filled with some interesting world building, but at the same time didn't go anywhere with it. We don't find out who the narrator is (not I self a problem) but we also don't meet any one. This seems like it would make a wonderful introduction to a larger story, but by its self it leaves me wantiing. I almost say use this as research and then write me a story about this planet. Sorry if this seems negative that isn't where I was trying to go. I would love to read more about this world though of sounds like an interesting place.
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