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  **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 08/05/2009

  I appreciate your review of THE CADUCEUS. I'm glad you liked it, and appreciate your suggestions. Take care. Tom
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  WildIrishRose on 08/03/2009

  Many thanks for your review of RAPE. It was great that you took the time to give me so much insight and it will surely help in a re write. Yes the story is based on fact as are all of the Carrie stories on my page. There is light at the end of the tunnel though, Carrie becomes a strong independent successful author, property developer and medical pioneer, but not before a fewother mishaps.. so happy reading!
  
  Many thanks
  
  Caroline
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  lizzayn on 07/29/2009

  Thanks for the review of "Innocent When You Dream." I'm glad you liked it!

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Comments About Lethal Lizard 12

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  **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 08/05/2009

  I appreciate your review of THE CADUCEUS. I'm glad you liked it, and appreciate your suggestions. Take care. Tom
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  WildIrishRose on 08/03/2009

  Many thanks for your review of RAPE. It was great that you took the time to give me so much insight and it will surely help in a re write. Yes the story is based on fact as are all of the Carrie stories on my page. There is light at the end of the tunnel though, Carrie becomes a strong independent successful author, property developer and medical pioneer, but not before a fewother mishaps.. so happy reading!
  
  Many thanks
  
  Caroline
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  lizzayn on 07/29/2009

  Thanks for the review of "Innocent When You Dream." I'm glad you liked it!
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  **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 07/02/2009

  There was a Halls of Justice flag on it because it was a possible copyright breach, so I decided to take it down, along with the other story I had posted on the site - but both were about five years old and it's about time I wrote something fresh.
  
  I do still intend to finish Mordor, but I guess I won't be posting it anywhere. I'll certainly send a copy along to you, though! :-)
  
  Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it! Cheered me up no end! :-)
  
  Cheers,
  
  Les
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  mnjones on 06/29/2009

  Thanks for your review of Mr. Television. Yeah, it really happened. I reconstructed the dialogue, but it's pretty much what was said by the individuals concerned, including the hooker.
  
  Good luck in your efforts.
  
  mnjones
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  Leemanchee on 06/29/2009

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  **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 06/25/2009

  Thanks for reading and reviewing THE HILL WIFE. I appreciate your time, your opinions, and your positive comments. Glad you liked it, and have a great day. Tom
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  Leemanchee on 06/23/2009

  Mordor She wrote - you have to read it - very funny.
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  Christopher Smith on 06/23/2009

  Hello Lethal,
  
  Thanks for the review of "In Sight". Excellent and constructive comments. Corey does see a lot of "sinners" in this story because it was the last story I wrote in an anthology and the people he is seeing are characters from the other stories. The Bible verses are correct. Funny thing was, I had a person who professes he is a Christian but treats people "beneath him" horribly (Corey) give me the quotes. He thought I was interested in being "saved" but was really supplying my story. The story does get obvious by the end, but I wanted it to. I thought the big finish of the last line still came off as a great "Oh, that's sick and you led me right to it" moment. Makes you look twice at how clean your forks are before you use them...
  
  Welcome to Triggerstreet. We can always use someone who gives advice and accurate critiques rather than the usual 'knock you down a peg" versions. Thanks again!
  
  Chris
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  Leemanchee on 06/22/2009

  Thanks for reviewing 'Daydreamer'.
  
  Yes, actually it was based on the Oakdene estate. Are you a local?
  
  Ha ha
  
  Glad you liked it. I hear that you have an interesting story to tell. I look forward to reviewing it.
  
  Peace
  
  PS - Transformer was a bit of a let down :(

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