Elsie White dies and creates conflict after the reading of her will.
Just starting out writing short stories for pleasure, would like to see if they bring pleasure to anyone else. Usually playing on the internet or with my cats or being arty; now trying out a new hobby which I'm having lots of...
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Just starting out writing short stories for pleasure, would like to see if they bring pleasure to anyone else. Usually playing on the internet or with my cats or being arty; now trying out a new hobby which I'm having lots of fun with.
Submissions by Lex007
Reviews by Lex007 26
A review of I Chanced Upon a Faunby Lex007 on 12/16/2010Wow, what an excellent story! You wove a really magical tale; you have a real talent here. The vocabulary you used painted a lovely vision, I wanted to enter your story and experience it first hand. Apart from a couple of spelling mistakes, the only thing I can recommend is that you make it longer. Give the reader more of this fabulous tale, perhaps more about their life together... read
A review of The False Profitby Lex007 on 11/29/2010At first I thought it was going to be a boring story about banking and finances but it turned out to be an interesting and funny way of looking at these topics. There were a few commas missing but I think it was quite grammatically sound. Who is Gordon? Why does he keep ringing Simon? I don’t think it really needs to be in the story as Gordon doesn’t appear anywhere else... read
A review of INCIDENT IN THE ROADby Lex007 on 11/29/2010Not much to fault in this story, but here are a couple of suggestions that you might consider. 1. First two sentences are good but the third is a bit long winded. But with a little change it’ll be a fabulous opening paragraph. It sets the scene for an interesting story… which it sure turns out to be. I loved it. 2. When I was reading the part where Billy sees how badly Leon... read