linch 

member since 04/20/2003 | last login 10/31/2012

The founder of "Visual Art Production", a low-budget, video filmmaking group, specialized in short films, music videos, and documentaries. 2007 Screenwriting Expo Screenplay Competition -- top 20%; 2007 Fade In Awards semi-finalist. Represented by Colosseum Management....

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The founder of "Visual Art Production", a low-budget, video filmmaking group, specialized in short films, music videos, and documentaries. 2007 Screenwriting Expo Screenplay Competition -- top 20%; 2007 Fade In Awards semi-finalist. Represented by Colosseum Management.

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Reviews by linch 132

  • A review of Homicide Special
    by linch on 05/30/2009
    This script suffers from flaws characteristic for beginner writers. First of all, you have to trim down the number of characters. You have too many of them, and it's difficult to develop the important ones, including your hero. As it is now, your script is twenty pages longer than it should be. The most important thing for your to do is trimming down. Trimming down dialog,... read
  • A review of Of Wolf and Man
    by linch on 05/17/2009
    I'm a fan of the Predator-like stories and you have a pretty well executed one here. Having said that, I think that the big issue here is the concept itself. It's just overused. I really don't see a way to pitch this to agents and producers as they have probably heard and seen this idea a thousands of times. Your structure is good as well as your dialog, but it would benefit... read
  • A review of Face Your Fears
    by linch on 08/13/2008
    First of all, kudos for your fast-paced writing style. It was really a fast read. I had a lot of questions throughout this script, but you answered all of them at the end. I just think that an audience might get a little frustrated during this story. Once we reach the end, it's all cleared up, but I think you need to give us more to during your story. Also, you need to set... read
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Comments About linch 14

  • jeff2680 on 05/18/2009

    Hey, thanks for the review of Of Wolf and Man. Appreciate it.

    Jeff
  • Ronnie71 on 05/10/2009

    Hi. Thanks for taking the time to read 'In the Shadow of the Wolf.' Your comments about the story direction are definitely noted. I'll certainly try to put them to good use going forward :)
  • **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 05/07/2009

    Hey

    Thank you for your review of Scam. Really appreciate it. Lots of good stuff to think about in there.

    Thanks again
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