Kathryn keeps receiving letters from her brother in WWII even after he is killed.
I write for various online sources. My background is in IT. I've been a writer since I could hold a pen. I find that is still the best way to write...holding a pen versus tapping laptop keys. I look forward to reading...
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I write for various online sources. My background is in IT. I've been a writer since I could hold a pen. I find that is still the best way to write...holding a pen versus tapping laptop keys. I look forward to reading your work and your reviews of my work.
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A review of Absolutely Corruptedby loracov on 08/14/2013Well, first of all, kudos on your creativity. I can tell that a lot of thought went into this story and the details were incredibly well written. It is an interesting take on school violence. I only have two issues - one is the title. I don't get it. Maybe I missed something but "corrupt", to me, generally means something different than super or ghostly powers. The second issue... read
A review of Dearestby loracov on 08/07/2013I do enjoy your writing style. You did a great job at aptly naming this piece and tying the name into the storyline (or vice versa). The only complaint I have is that the ending feels rushed. It feels forced. It is not believable to me that the owner of the bar would say, "so, I noticed you looking at my ring...here's the story about this ring, etc." The rest of the story is... read
A review of The Immigrantby loracov on 08/06/2013A fictional representation of an actual historic event - nicely done. I like the author's writing style. The description is very good. The reader gets a real sense of being present in the story because of the author's vivid prose. This story has some grammatical problems and inconsistencies ("on board" in one place and then "onboard" in another place, misplaced commas, etc.)... read