loracov 

member since 04/05/2004 | last login 09/29/2014

I write for various online sources. My background is in IT. I've been a writer since I could hold a pen. I find that is still the best way to write...holding a pen versus tapping laptop keys. I look forward to reading...

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I write for various online sources. My background is in IT. I've been a writer since I could hold a pen. I find that is still the best way to write...holding a pen versus tapping laptop keys. I look forward to reading your work and your reviews of my work.

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Reviews by loracov 150

  • A review of Absolutely Corrupted
    by loracov on 08/14/2013
    Well, first of all, kudos on your creativity. I can tell that a lot of thought went into this story and the details were incredibly well written. It is an interesting take on school violence. I only have two issues - one is the title. I don't get it. Maybe I missed something but "corrupt", to me, generally means something different than super or ghostly powers. The second issue... read
  • A review of Dearest
    by loracov on 08/07/2013
    I do enjoy your writing style. You did a great job at aptly naming this piece and tying the name into the storyline (or vice versa). The only complaint I have is that the ending feels rushed. It feels forced. It is not believable to me that the owner of the bar would say, "so, I noticed you looking at my ring...here's the story about this ring, etc." The rest of the story is... read
  • A review of The Immigrant
    by loracov on 08/06/2013
    A fictional representation of an actual historic event - nicely done. I like the author's writing style. The description is very good. The reader gets a real sense of being present in the story because of the author's vivid prose. This story has some grammatical problems and inconsistencies ("on board" in one place and then "onboard" in another place, misplaced commas, etc.)... read
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Comments About loracov 16

  • nick74 on 08/22/2011

    Hi, Loracov!

    I don't know how, but your review of The Sown got passed me and I didn't realize you had posted one until just now. I generally make a point to reach out to those who read my material with a "Thanks for your time!" That being said, "Thanks for your time!"

    Gosh, you said some very encouraging things in there, too, something every writer yearns to hear from an audience. 'Preciate you.

    Nick
  • MaxWatt on 07/22/2011

    Thanks for the review, I appreciate the time and effort.
  • lisabelle03 on 03/17/2008

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