A young man talks to his deceased best friend.
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A review of In Sightby lrees on 08/21/2012The concept was very cool. It reminded me of the movie Unbreakable. I thought it was very well-executed too. The transitions to and from his visions were great. The only thing wrong I think is that the character is a bit unrelatable. It's understood that he is a religious person, but it seems that he has morals mixed up just like everyone else, hence charging people extra... read
A review of The Trainby lrees on 07/17/2012I like the slow descent into surreality and the way it comes full-circle at the end. I also liked the imagery and the foreshadowing of the MC Esher drawing. Everything sort of lent itself to the idea of being caught in a time-warping nightmare. For the most part, though, I found myself asking 'what's the point.' All of the events kinda seemed random and disconnected, and... read
A review of Gods In Trainingby lrees on 07/11/2012You have a brilliant writing style that harmoniously blends scientific and spiritual imagery and concepts. Your story is really intriguing, but i think the most interesting part of it is the world in which it takes place, which it's hard to get a sense of in the story. You leave most of it to us to gather from context clues, which I definitely prefer as opposed to just spelling... read