Lyn Singleton 

member since 11/30/2006 | last login 06/03/2010

Former actor turned salesman working in New York now a successful independent Real Estate Broker. Strong desire to return to entertainment industry as a writer/producer. Love jazz, live music, Miami, sailing, fishing, and travel....

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Former actor turned salesman working in New York now a successful independent Real Estate Broker. Strong desire to return to entertainment industry as a writer/producer. Love jazz, live music, Miami, sailing, fishing, and travel.

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Reviews by Lyn Singleton 4

  • A review of Think of the Children
    by Lyn Singleton on 07/06/2008
    At first I was a little confused with the ominous start and then the switch to a Western genre, but the two themes became one story after the first few scenes. I was drawn into Joy's painful past and began to understand why she was a great hero for the story and why she felt such a committment to finding Elsie and finding out the truth. The ritualistic ordeal the baby and... read

Comments About Lyn Singleton 1

  • Glenn Hawkins on 09/07/2009

    Hi Lyn,
    You have a great idea for a story set in an industry you know. Your dialog is wonderful. I love it. It is what I began here with, but I was forced to revise it. There are actually near Illiterates here, who have never seen it and will attack you for using it. They will say, I was confused. I didn't understand. Dont use phonetic misspelling. Let the actor do that. The actor and director will be insulted. What to do? Screw them and dont let them hurt your feelings.

    I am writing you because of your formatting. It is atrociously unorthodox and your going to be fried in oil for it. I am sorry, but lucky for you. Lucky, lucky. It is the easiest thing to fix. You can study formatting for less than two hours and then be able to use it fairly well.
    http://www.storysense.com/docs/SPFormat.pdf
    http://www.storysense.com/format/slugs.htm
    http://movie-page.com/movie_scripts.htm

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