Lyn Singleton
member since 11/30/2006 |
last login 06/03/2010
Former actor turned salesman working in New York now a successful independent Real Estate Broker. Strong desire to return to entertainment industry as a writer/producer. Love jazz, live music, Miami, sailing, fishing, and travel....
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Former actor turned salesman working in New York now a successful independent Real Estate Broker. Strong desire to return to entertainment industry as a writer/producer. Love jazz, live music, Miami, sailing, fishing, and travel.
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A review of Think of the Childrenby Lyn Singleton on 07/06/2008At first I was a little confused with the ominous start and then the switch to a Western genre, but the two themes became one story after the first few scenes. I was drawn into Joy's painful past and began to understand why she was a great hero for the story and why she felt such a committment to finding Elsie and finding out the truth. The ritualistic ordeal the baby and... read
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Glenn Hawkins on 09/07/2009
You have a great idea for a story set in an industry you know. Your dialog is wonderful. I love it. It is what I began here with, but I was forced to revise it. There are actually near Illiterates here, who have never seen it and will attack you for using it. They will say, “I was confused. I didn't understand. Don’t use phonetic misspelling. Let the actor do that. The actor and director will be insulted.” What to do? Screw them and don‘t let them hurt your feelings.
I am writing you because of your formatting. It is atrociously unorthodox and your going to be fried in oil for it. I am sorry, but lucky for you. Lucky, lucky. It is the easiest thing to fix. You can study formatting for less than two hours and then be able to use it fairly well.
http://www.storysense.com/docs/SPFormat.pdf
http://www.storysense.com/format/slugs.htm
http://movie-page.com/movie_scripts.htm