Ok so right now I'm attending the New York Film Academy and will be submitting scripts and shorts in a few months! Looking foward to seeing what you guys have to say...
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Ok so right now I'm attending the New York Film Academy and will be submitting scripts and shorts in a few months! Looking foward to seeing what you guys have to say
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Reviews by Mastawok84 33
A review of Promiselandby Mastawok84 on 02/08/2007There is alot of things I did not like about the script. First off we have three characters names beginning with a C. CHARLES, CHRISTIAN, and CURTIS. Thats gets a little confusing to our audience after a while, I dont want to have to ask wait which one is which. So what was the whole story about??? Ok so a virus comes into play and of course people need food, but what is it... read
A review of The Solo'sby Mastawok84 on 07/19/2006Funny concept. Def a Coneheads meets Osbourne type of thing. I like when you had Jack on the phone with the Emperor and played it off like it was a reality tv show. The way it was shot was very appropriate for the nature of the short. Dialogue was good even down to some of the accents. Good portrayel of Sharon Osbourne being obsessed with her pets, and I love how you incorporated... read
A review of Losing Simonby Mastawok84 on 06/26/2006Job well done. A story about a challenged disappearing individual and his friend or sisters struggle to keep a hold on him. Dialogue was well done, and so was the acting. There was some video problem that looked like you just didn't clean the tape or the tape deck, but it was a good short. The environment seemed real!