Ok so right now I'm attending the New York Film Academy and will be submitting scripts and shorts in a few months! Looking foward to seeing what you guys have to say...
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Ok so right now I'm attending the New York Film Academy and will be submitting scripts and shorts in a few months! Looking foward to seeing what you guys have to say
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Reviews by Mastawok84 33
A review of Promiselandby Mastawok84 on 02/08/2007There is alot of things I did not like about the script. First off we have three characters names beginning with a C. CHARLES, CHRISTIAN, and CURTIS. Thats gets a little confusing to our audience after a while, I dont want to have to ask wait which one is which. So what was the whole story about??? Ok so a virus comes into play and of course people need food, but what is it... read
A review of The Solo'sby Mastawok84 on 07/19/2006Funny concept. Def a Coneheads meets Osbourne type of thing. I like when you had Jack on the phone with the Emperor and played it off like it was a reality tv show. The way it was shot was very appropriate for the nature of the short. Dialogue was good even down to some of the accents. Good portrayel of Sharon Osbourne being obsessed with her pets, and I love how you incorporated... read
A review of Lunch.by Mastawok84 on 06/12/2006Well I've seen alot better, and I've seen alot worse. Your dialogue reminds me of something I would put in my short. There def was some alternating buzz sounds when the shots would change. The quality of video is kind of rough, but I think you did a semi-decent job. The editing was the worst part, didn't really seem to flow and there was alot of jumpy cuts made..