Desperate to save his family, a poor Indian boy turns to black market blood trafficking.
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A review of Intersectionby Michael Keller on 12/10/2012This is a very interesting script. Here are my running notes: -Good attention grabbing opening scene. -Destiny having a doppelganger seems very dark and Jungian. Perhaps her "double" should have some starkly opposite, dark character traits. -Madeline is a very endearing character. I like how she waxes philosophical. -Am I misreading it, or is Destiny dating her shrink?... read
A review of The Four Hour Workweekby Michael Keller on 12/03/2012The Four Hour Workweek is funny and heartwarming, with endearing characters. Overall, I enjoyed it, but my main concern is that there isn't much conflict, since we already know what will happen to Bobby, and he seems to achieve his smaller goals quite easily, so it reads like a sort of amusing travelogue. -It might be funny if Mr. Greenberg starts out normal and then suddenly... read
A review of Penis Envy (NEW DRAFT)by Michael Keller on 11/12/2012This is a funny concept and a cleanly executed story. I donít have so many notes, because the script seems to accomplish its intended purpose: -No need to editorialize in the first paragraph. Trust your audience. -Perhaps establish his impotence in the first scene with some kid of humiliation? -You do a good job of making Randall likable. -The pacing is good and the dialog... read