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  Iritu1021 on 05/12/2012

  Thanks for reviewing my script "Mania". yes, you got me - Margo was originally written as a man. I really liked that character but the whole bisexual male angle did not seem to appeal to most people so I rewrote it with a woman. Obviously, I need to do a better clean up on this draft before I start sending it out.
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  stephjones on 05/12/2012

  Hey Micheal,
  
  Thank you for taking on another one of my screenplays! I laughed when you mentioned it was land based as I wrote it with exactly that in mind, afraid I was a one trick pony with my boat stories. Interesting idea to not resolve her issues but allow the tension to build. Curious whether you found the story itself plausible?
  Also, you obviously didn't grow up in Alabama or you'd know about the topless car wash...they are the tits :)
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  olufemi on 05/10/2012

  Ha! I really don't think you'd have anything to worry about; your screenplays' scores say you're a pretty accomplished writer. I doubt I'd be giving you 1s and 2s...
  
  All the same, I'll respect your wishes. Thanks for your review of REX TANNER. Glad you had fun with it.

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Comments About Michael Keller 127

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  Iritu1021 on 05/12/2012

  Thanks for reviewing my script "Mania". yes, you got me - Margo was originally written as a man. I really liked that character but the whole bisexual male angle did not seem to appeal to most people so I rewrote it with a woman. Obviously, I need to do a better clean up on this draft before I start sending it out.
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  stephjones on 05/12/2012

  Hey Micheal,
  
  Thank you for taking on another one of my screenplays! I laughed when you mentioned it was land based as I wrote it with exactly that in mind, afraid I was a one trick pony with my boat stories. Interesting idea to not resolve her issues but allow the tension to build. Curious whether you found the story itself plausible?
  Also, you obviously didn't grow up in Alabama or you'd know about the topless car wash...they are the tits :)
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  olufemi on 05/10/2012

  Ha! I really don't think you'd have anything to worry about; your screenplays' scores say you're a pretty accomplished writer. I doubt I'd be giving you 1s and 2s...
  
  All the same, I'll respect your wishes. Thanks for your review of REX TANNER. Glad you had fun with it.
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  happywash on 05/09/2012

  Hello,
  Thank you so much for taking the "leap" and reading my script "Broken." I've worked very hard on it, and you made me feel fantastic with your kind words. I truly appreciate your piece of advice, and I am looking into how I can incorporate it. So thanks again!
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  mikeylikey on 05/07/2012

  Thank you for your kind review of ZOMEDY. Feels like you got what I was going after and glad you had fun reading it. I tried not to follow a set formula in this SP and wanted to make a real ensemble piece with no real lead character. It does have a slow burn approach letting the attack build up. I think it was my failings as a writer that the ending seemed anti climatic, i wanted to reader to think that it was an act of God after Cramden is devoured by the undead. Thank you for the review once again.
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  Howie428 on 05/05/2012

  Michael, Thanks for your review of "Rock & Water". You've given me some good things to think about.
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  Tom Nelson on 04/24/2012

  Yo man, just wanted to thank you for your review of End Times. I've almost finished the second draft and your comments were seriously helpful. Cheers again, Tom
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  stephjones on 04/08/2012

  Hey Michael,
  Thanks for reading my stuff--again.
  This is a raw story which has taken me forever to get a handle on. It is my first stab at writing a male protag so thanks for the helpful ideas on making him more likable. I thought his relationship with the Pelican and his Momma would help but your reaction to him is consistent with the others who have read it--so back to the drawing board.
  I agree with you on the resolution with the Notaire/Phillipe thing. I'll keep working on it.
  Also, thanks for the euro reminder--(blush) and the other notes.
  The Lily thing is tricky for me. Florian has to overcome his Francophobia to see her as she truly is. It's part of his arc. I wanted their 'hook-up' to always be tentative, at best, ending only on the 'possible' note.
  I'll keep working on it -you've helped me move forward.
  All the best,
  Steph
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  stephjones on 03/24/2012

  Hey Micheal,
  Thanks so much for your review of T7YI--glad you liked it. your notes are appreciated and will be taken into consideration on my next rewrite--which seems to be never-ending.
  all the best,
  steph
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  mattyrm on 02/12/2012

  Hey Mike.
  Know the feeling. "Use less words - use more words...huh?"
  For mine, if it's action that matters - take time to write it as economically and as accurately as possible.
  Wagons Circle - I love that expression. Sums it up for mine.

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