mijorico 

member since 09/08/2004 | last login 09/18/2014

When I was younger, I was always the guy feeding his friends the funny lines and watching them get the laughs. Now I'm trying to make a living at it....

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When I was younger, I was always the guy feeding his friends the funny lines and watching them get the laughs. Now I'm trying to make a living at it.

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Reviews by mijorico 119

  • A review of Wolf-Girl
    by mijorico on 07/06/2012
    This script boasts an attractive premise, as well as a universal theme which the targeted demographic would certainly find relatable. The problem is, like our main character, this draft suffers from a bit of an identity crisis. We are introduced to Rhonda as a brave young girl just beginning to realize who she really is, but who is subsequently ostracized for it. When... read
  • A review of Evergreen
    by mijorico on 03/26/2012
    First, I’d like to thank you for your review of The Long Road Home. I appreciate the gesture. As for this piece, you asked for my honest opinion, so here it is. I think this story needs quite a bit of work. First, let’s start with the title. Evergreen is the name of the nursery where David is briefly employed in the first act. Beyond that, the title has no obvious... read
  • A review of Not Cops (rewrite)
    by mijorico on 07/13/2011
    This story features a clever premise that offers a different perspective on the buddy cop genre. Your opening is strong and clever, and successfully establishes the world of this story. I enjoyed the idea of seeing this very typical, over-the-top interrogation scene, only to reveal that these guys aren’t really cops. I think you could have pushed that even further, maybe... read
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Comments About mijorico 25

  • DJBFilmz on 08/30/2012

    Thanks for the review and I would very much like you comments. You should be getting an email from me.

    - David
  • mijorico on 08/08/2012

    DebraSwan wrote:
    Excellent post in the constructive review thread. Very, very helpful list!

    Cheers,
    Debra


    Thanks, Debra. I appreciate the feedback.
  • DebraSwan on 08/08/2012

    Excellent post in the constructive review thread. Very, very helpful list!

    Cheers,
    Debra
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