Mike Leon 

member since 01/16/2009 | last login 12/03/2011

Mike Leon is actually a swarm of insects wearing a man suit....

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Mike Leon is actually a swarm of insects wearing a man suit.

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Reviews by Mike Leon 23

  • by Mike Leon on 07/05/2009
    It's okay. I'm not crazy about it, but it's okay. There aren't any glaring flaws I can point out. You don't have any major disasters of formatting or structure. The worst thing I can say is that it just didn't hold my attention very well. It is too wordy. That is one thing you could definitely fix. You want a lot of whitespace. It is a faster and more attractive read with... read
  • A review of Forsaken (rev.)
    by Mike Leon on 06/28/2009
    I read an earlier draft of this script months ago and reviewed it. It was a good script then and it looks like all you changed was the ending (the old one didn't really make much sense if I recall). This new one is much better. It makes a lot of sense and ties into the beginning of the script better. Everything else is good. I can't find anything to pick on this time around... read
  • A review of The Apprentice
    by Mike Leon on 02/23/2009
    I started off really liking this script but as I read more and more I liked it less and less. By the end I just wanted it to be over with. The plot doesn't move forward all that well and I can't say the protagonist drives it much at all either. By the time he joined the rebellion it was just too convoluted for me to care much anymore. The first twenty pages were funny, but... read
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Comments About Mike Leon 23

  • Kevin Via on 11/29/2011

    Just happened to see C Word featured on the home page. High-larious bio, dude. First laugh of the day. Sounds like an awesome concept. I might have to add to my growing read list.
  • drewcrew on 12/19/2009

    I liked Recession Proof and I think It's pretty good. I also think the story has a chance to be great. I think maybe it should be darker. I find some of the humor a little dark and sometimes dry, which I love. The plot screams dark comedy but It seemed a little too light-hearted to me. One thing I would like to see is the murder to not be accidental.
  • **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 09/14/2009

    Hi Mike. Thanks for taking the time to review Wolflord and provide feedback. Much appreciated. Cheers.
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