Unable to find employment in the collapsing economy, two college guys start their own business in the only recession... more
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by Mike Leon on 07/05/2009It's okay. I'm not crazy about it, but it's okay. There aren't any glaring flaws I can point out. You don't have any major disasters of formatting or structure. The worst thing I can say is that it just didn't hold my attention very well. It is too wordy. That is one thing you could definitely fix. You want a lot of whitespace. It is a faster and more attractive read with... read
A review of Forsaken (rev.)by Mike Leon on 06/28/2009I read an earlier draft of this script months ago and reviewed it. It was a good script then and it looks like all you changed was the ending (the old one didn't really make much sense if I recall). This new one is much better. It makes a lot of sense and ties into the beginning of the script better. Everything else is good. I can't find anything to pick on this time around... read
A review of The Apprenticeby Mike Leon on 02/23/2009I started off really liking this script but as I read more and more I liked it less and less. By the end I just wanted it to be over with. The plot doesn't move forward all that well and I can't say the protagonist drives it much at all either. By the time he joined the rebellion it was just too convoluted for me to care much anymore. The first twenty pages were funny, but... read