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Reviews by mlambush 228

  • A review of Cruel To Be Kind
    by mlambush on 05/13/2011
    Well not this exact script, but dozens of others like it. The semi-autobiographical slice of life set in [high school/college], starring the author's friends or facsimiles of them, [drinking/getting high] in almost every scene, with little to no plot. If I had a dollar for every one of these I've read on Triggerstreet, I wouldn't have to worry about selling my own stuff... read
  • by mlambush on 05/04/2011
    Been a long time since I've read one of your stories, Bob. I have to say with all honesty that this one was probably my favorite. It read quickly, the actions lines were the right length with right amount of attitude, the dialog was really good and there were characters I actually cared about. I am not kidding when I say that I had an emotional moment when Brooks prevailed... read
  • A review of The Defendant (#2)
    by mlambush on 04/24/2011
    There's a kernel of a good idea here. While certainly a page turner and a lean read, I felt little emotional resonance with the characters, especially Michael. You're pretty close to having a solid plot here, but you need to give us characters we care about in order to really make this piece shine. You've got alot of setup packed into Act I and I'm not sure it's effective... read
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Comments About mlambush 276

  • stephjones on 02/27/2014

    You don't know me but I'm happy to see you round these parts again.
  • heat_wave187 on 02/03/2012

    thanks, mickey i am in distinguished company...
  • Michelle77 on 01/07/2012

    mlambush wrote:

    That's no way to talk to your future mother-in-law, mlambush.
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