mlwillis 

member since 12/21/2006 | last login 12/10/2012

You have to be who you are, simply because that is who you are. People inadvertently, with their attitudes, try to alter you, but you must resist, listen, acknowledge, and keep true, without fear and intimidation. You can walk into a room...

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You have to be who you are, simply because that is who you are. People inadvertently, with their attitudes, try to alter you, but you must resist, listen, acknowledge, and keep true, without fear and intimidation. You can walk into a room and half of the people won't like you no matter what you do, so be yourself, and the right half won't like you. ML Willis I don't know the key to success, but the key to failure is trying to please everybody. Bill Cosby

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Reviews by mlwillis 39

  • by mlwillis on 10/22/2008
    Some potential here. I like a lot of things in here. My primary concern is the lack of structure to your story line. I really didnít like this script until page 32. There were some good intriguing things when Bryan talks about himself as the dust in the wind. Then it goes back to the predictable. It has potential but you need to flush out the theme a little better. Faith,... read
  • by mlwillis on 09/22/2008
    Wow. There really isnít too much I can say here. Youíve done a really good job. But Iíll try to help a little. I. FORMATTING Your formatting is good. There are a few spelling errors and typos but youíll have no problem fixing them. II. PLOT/STRUCTURE: You have a good plot, an okay name. Your structure is good too. You could probably cut some things out, but thatís a matter... read
  • A review of Graveyard Gray - Rev
    by mlwillis on 01/31/2008
    Overall I like your writing, but I had to hunt really hard for the story. Page three, Iíd take out, what is that bill, Iím tired (youíve already established that) it's unnecessary. Go from, Yeah, to you canít deviate from the script. He says nothing, come to my office. Show. Show. Introduce Felicia in the above scene. Take out os, youíre directing. Next sceneís really good,... read
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  • Piper07 on 02/13/2010

    I just noticed that you had me on your favorites. I also noticed that you have my favorite quote on your profile also. That's very cool. Thanks for having me on your favorites.

    ~Piper
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