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  **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 03/21/2013

  Thank you for your review of my script. I will take your notes and apply them to this script and future projects. You seem very knowledgeable and I hope we can exchange thoughts at a later time!
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  f-ceska on 12/09/2012

  Hi M, thanks for the comment about 'Reflections', though I think it's a shame you decided to remove the assignment. I'm really not looking for 'ranking' - I just want to know what people's true opinions and reactions are, and you don't have to be a screenplay expert to be honest. Everyone watches movies, so everyone has an idea of what works and what doesn't. (And let's face it, there are a lot of people who think they are experts but aren't and vice versa).
  I hope you'll still read it anyway and look forward to your feedback.
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  jwest on 09/21/2012

  Thanks for the read and review of Ten Thousand Words.

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  **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 03/21/2013

  Thank you for your review of my script. I will take your notes and apply them to this script and future projects. You seem very knowledgeable and I hope we can exchange thoughts at a later time!
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  f-ceska on 12/09/2012

  Hi M, thanks for the comment about 'Reflections', though I think it's a shame you decided to remove the assignment. I'm really not looking for 'ranking' - I just want to know what people's true opinions and reactions are, and you don't have to be a screenplay expert to be honest. Everyone watches movies, so everyone has an idea of what works and what doesn't. (And let's face it, there are a lot of people who think they are experts but aren't and vice versa).
  I hope you'll still read it anyway and look forward to your feedback.
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  jwest on 09/21/2012

  Thanks for the read and review of Ten Thousand Words.
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  scotfire on 08/07/2012

  you're welcome.
  
  maybe wasn't what you were looking for but I did my best. It is shorter than I normally review. Hard to get the full picture going.
  
  Write it as a story-I'm sure it will come across much better and do well.
  
  Jackie
  
  
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  wanderingmbhorn on 08/04/2012

  Hey M.L., thanks a bunch for your review of THE MANY MISSING..., I really appreciate it!
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  lcrae29 on 04/12/2012

  Thanks for your review of my short film.
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  nick74 on 03/31/2012

  mmckean
  
  Hey, man, thanks for the comment! It made me chuckle.
  
  I don't really look at it so much as a measure of the quality of work, but rather due to the fact that I've got 19 submissions posted (one of which is a horribly failed screenplay), which in turn is only a measure of my obsessive tendencies. So I suppose when someone carpet bombs a site with short stories, they're inevitably going to get a few features. Never the less, I never look a gift horse in the mouth. So, I will proudly say "yes! 3 features today! And tomorrow... we'll see."
  
  I revisited Cassandra, in parts, the other day. Delicious stuff, my friend. Keep up the good work and I'll see you around the Street.
  
  Nick
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  kashan on 03/29/2012

  pleasure!
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  KSisk90 on 03/17/2012

  Thanks for your review of my story.
  
  I actually hadn't thought of doing a part 2 to it, but hey I guess if your asking about it, then the story must really be good =)
  
  I actually found that picture after writing the story, it fits too perfectly. After I found it I just had to go back and change Ellie's description. lol
  
  I didn't notice while writing it or editing it, but I think your right. It does look a bit off now that I look again. I can definitely add some description to the beginning dialogue.
  
  Also, I had originally wanted to refer to Tyrone as "Ty" at the beginning of the story, and later reveal. But I thought people would see "Ty" and automatically think it was a black name, so I decided against it. What do you think?
  
  Thank you for the review and the advice. Ill definitely keep writing.
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  shangauri on 03/15/2012

  Hey mmckean
  
  Thanks for your review about my short story "And then there were none"
  
  Yeah, I am very well aware of the Agatha Christie classic as well as the movie made out of it. I just wanna mention here that this story which I wrote is purely fictional. I must have put a disclaimer though ;) . Anyways, i just felt the title is more apt for this story as it is directly related to the ending.
  
  Also, this story does not focus on how the world ended. Its all about what if just 2 persons survived when the whole world ends and they wake up in a mythical place illustrated in the drawing. Why were the fighting? because they didn't know that a message of this sorts exists inside the box. That's were the selfish tendency of humans come into picture which leads to all the fight that happen afterwards.
  
  oh yeah, reg why it was told and not shown is because i am gonna make a short film out of it. I am writing proper screenplay for this. Just to get some comments about the concept i posted it as short story.
  
  and Thanks once again for reading and giving a constructive feedback! :)

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