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A review of Grits, etc.

by mnimocks on 03/12/2007

OK is this guy the result of a cloning experiment involving David Byrne? That was pretty well done. Take a bland subject and report on it Mr. Rogers style. I do think that the end could have been a bit more dramatic or punchy, like lifting the guy off the ground a bit and then simply dropping him when the man on the bench refuses to help. Good job and keep making more. This... read

Beware the rare and elusive

A review of Amazing Nature

by mnimocks on 03/12/2007

I have to say that was rather amusing. You definitely have the doc err ughh mockumentary style down pretty well. To be constructive I would have ramped up the pacing a bit and increased camera movement, but hey, I'm being picky. I am sure this might have been better if I had seen other episodes (if there are any) to get some sense of who the characters are. Nicely done! Keep... read

the Poet

A review of The Poet

by mnimocks on 12/08/2003

I loved the music. Good use of black and white. I thought that it was great that you kept the natural sound involved but at just the right level. Great sound mixing. One thing though - they both still ride the bus at the same time - won't they meet again? Go make a feature!

Didn't I review this?

A review of "Attack of the Hungrums!"

by mnimocks on 12/08/2003

I swear that I already reviewed this one. I know that I already watched it. Anyway nice job on the animation. We have another Flash-er! Is this part of a series? How did he become a superhero anyway? Looks as if you have an animation career ahead of you if you can find someone who wants to write longer scripts. Keep it up!

Good but improvements here and there

A review of Missing You

by mnimocks on 12/08/2003

The music overtakes the dialogue in places. Try using a ducker effect next time. Also watch your eye line. Although you did not cross it you had several edits that shifted the character from the far right side of the frame to the left and that can take an audience out of the movie. Try using some disolves instead of jump cuts. The mood was so smooth and the music complemented... read

Can you say suspense?

A review of Heebie Jeebies

by mnimocks on 12/08/2003

Well you kept my attention but I have to say the ending was a letdown. I think you could have really drawn the suspense out in the end. It seems as if the first night and second night should have been reversed due to the amount of suspense and fright. The ending just didn't work that well. Nice camera work and a compatible score help this one out. Go make your feature and make... read

An Ending

A review of Early Morning in the Tenement

by mnimocks on 12/08/2003

The ending works but I really wanted to check my email waiting for it to happen. You had about 9 minutes to fill with visual parades that instead are full of badly lit medium shots. I wouldhave personally gone nuts with close ups and cat-shots. So much cool thing to look at but we never see a one! Show me some more of the fly on the wall perspective. That is what we are hearing... read

Looks awsome!

A review of The Big Maybe

by mnimocks on 12/08/2003

I have to first say kudos on the look. Very Very cool. As far as the story goes, I was a bit confused even when they revealed that the dead guy was him. I think the dialogue had something to do with it. I believe that either writing some better dialogue compatible with each actor would greatly help. Maybe the problem is the dialogue. You have such great actors that they seemed... read

Well done!

A review of LIFE 2.0

by mnimocks on 12/07/2003

I have to say this is one of the few films I really enjoyed viewing. The concept and story were done very well. This could easily be expanded into a feature with the "guide" poping up along the way. Curious though if the Roswell looking guide was supposed to be invisile then why did the man see him? hmmmmm. Looks really nice even on the crappy compressed version. Keep it up!... read

Obviously made by an adult

A review of Young Love

by mnimocks on 12/07/2003

Is this our future? Kids learning how to have majorly messed up relationships before they are 4? Technically the sound needs some major work. Try using an external mic next time and not the camera mic. Most cameras will even let you plug one into it. Nice under-roos - wish mine still fit. There was a story albeit a weaker one. She hates him, then for some reason they get married... read

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