motpicvideo 

member since 02/02/2003 | last login 12/03/2012

My name is Brian, from the town of Redmond, Oregon. I graduated from Bob Jones University in 1998 with a degree in Cinema and Video Production, and am hoping to direct theatrical features in the future. I run a full-time videography business...

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My name is Brian, from the town of Redmond, Oregon. I graduated from Bob Jones University in 1998 with a degree in Cinema and Video Production, and am hoping to direct theatrical features in the future. I run a full-time videography business for weddings, parties, and other events, and in my spare moments I try to squeeze in either a self-produced narrative movie short or some work on a screenplay. I am a husband of twelve years and a father of three children. I don't pretend to be a writer; it's one of my weak points. Anything I actually finish that ends up here will probably be mediocre at best, but thank you for taking the time to read it anyway.

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  • A review of According To Plan
    by motpicvideo on 09/25/2005
    I found this to be largely a very nice job on your selected theme. For the most part, I was interested in where it was going and how it would end, as opposed to its cousin "Magnolia" which really started to grate on me and bore me about 2/3 of the way through. A couple of thoughts: First, I didn't feel like it centered on its theme enough. True, we don't want to be beat... read
  • A review of CORY'S HERO
    by motpicvideo on 07/30/2005
    I very much liked the idea of this screenplay, and was even more amused by the banter of the kids. Cory has some fabulous lines that made me laugh out loud. Characters are pretty strong, easily identifiable. I think there are a couple of things that are either missing or not played up enough. First, we need a deeper conflict. Right now you have an A-Line conflict where... read
  • A review of PERFECT
    by motpicvideo on 07/29/2005
    I always get a kind of sick feeling when a script involves child abuse. I'll try to set that aside and look at what you have here, which is something potentially interesting. Some fun little twists and surprises make the script entertaining. But there is a stark simplicity to the project. Woman Picks Up Man, Knocks Him Out, Threatens to Mutilate Him, Gets Shot By Cops... read
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