Mr. Bush 

member since 09/19/2008 | last login 10/09/2011

I AM A SCREENWRITING JUNKIE IN NEED OF A FIX....

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I AM A SCREENWRITING JUNKIE IN NEED OF A FIX.

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Reviews by Mr. Bush 10

  • by Mr. Bush on 12/13/2008
    Great script! Well written. Easy read. I loved the way the characters were introduced. The characters all had distinct voices and personalities. The dialogue was very believable. Great job with Arnold. The story flowed smoothly. My only suggestion would be the montages. They seem a little long. Try to cut each sequence of the montage to one or two sentences. If it's too long... read
  • A review of Tomboys
    by Mr. Bush on 12/05/2008
    I thought this was a well written screenplay. The characters were believable. They all had distinct voices. Following Danny as the main character it was interesting to see his relationships with the other characters (Sarah, Kevin, Fitz and Veronica) and how they developed. This only made Danny's character more convincing and engaging. The only suggestion I might throw out... read

Comments About Mr. Bush 5

  • bha26 on 12/17/2008

    Not a problem. Glad I could be of some help and best of luck with it.
  • **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 12/12/2008

    Mr. Bush ~ Thanks for the time and effort you gave to read and review TEN MILES OF BAD ROAD. I'm glad you enjoyed it. And I'm grateful for your ideas and generous comments. You have yourself a great day! Tom
  • ydnar600 on 12/11/2008

    You bet, Mr. Bush...I enjoyed reading it and look forward to what you do with it!
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