Two black men's lives become embroiled in a web of deceit as they become pillars of the black community while masterminding... more
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Reviews by Mr. Bush 10
A review of October's Last (A Halloween Story)by Mr. Bush on 12/13/2008Great script! Well written. Easy read. I loved the way the characters were introduced. The characters all had distinct voices and personalities. The dialogue was very believable. Great job with Arnold. The story flowed smoothly. My only suggestion would be the montages. They seem a little long. Try to cut each sequence of the montage to one or two sentences. If it's too long... read
A review of Tomboysby Mr. Bush on 12/05/2008I thought this was a well written screenplay. The characters were believable. They all had distinct voices. Following Danny as the main character it was interesting to see his relationships with the other characters (Sarah, Kevin, Fitz and Veronica) and how they developed. This only made Danny's character more convincing and engaging. The only suggestion I might throw out... read