Mr. Cinema 

member since 11/19/2009 | last login 04/14/2014

What can I say? I'm enjoying being a part of the ts community. I enjoying writing, watching and learning from movies....

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What can I say? I'm enjoying being a part of the ts community. I enjoying writing, watching and learning from movies.

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Reviews by Mr. Cinema 43

  • by Mr. Cinema on 06/03/2013
    You what's weird is I was assigned the 3rd draft and the 2nd draft of this. I figured I'd review the most updated one, plus you had me at comedy. I'll list thoughts and ideas that you can use however you see fit. Pg. 1 Is it necessary to capitalize occupants and farmhand? Thatís kind of dated in screenplay these days. Pg. 2 Your contd isn't formatted correctly. It should... read
  • by Mr. Cinema on 04/18/2013
    What is up my screenwriting pal? I decided to give this another go as I was familiar with it since I previously reviewed the original draft I believe. Youíre on my favorites on here, if you donít believe me check your favorites lol. I seem to remember one of gripes was Ana wasn't a sympathetic protagonist. Letís see if that changed any. Iíll give you my honest thoughts ideas,... read
  • A review of ALBUMOLOGY
    by Mr. Cinema on 04/03/2013
    Itís always fun when you complete a screenplay. Based on the synopsis I immediately imagined Bruce Willis playing in this. Now, on to the review. Everything I write will be in real time and you can take my notes however you see fit. Pg. 3 One of the things I always pay attention to is does writer format their script decently? So far Iíd say you do but donít forget to space... read
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Comments About Mr. Cinema 39

  • mbannonb on 06/26/2013

    Thanks for the feedback on Party Hackers!
  • htxp on 06/23/2013

    I would never call anyone's script that. I apologize for being unclear. I was referring to the inconsistency and indecisiveness. As writers we've all had those problems at one point or another.
  • blogan6814 on 06/23/2013

    I went through yesterday, sorry for the, lateness and couldn't find any others. So looks like I made a mountain out of a molehill!
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