Mr. Cinema 

member since 11/19/2009 | last login 07/14/2014

What can I say? I'm enjoying being a part of the ts community. I enjoying writing, watching and learning from movies....

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What can I say? I'm enjoying being a part of the ts community. I enjoying writing, watching and learning from movies.

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Reviews by Mr. Cinema 43

  • by Mr. Cinema on 06/03/2013
    You what's weird is I was assigned the 3rd draft and the 2nd draft of this. I figured I'd review the most updated one, plus you had me at comedy. I'll list thoughts and ideas that you can use however you see fit. Pg. 1 Is it necessary to capitalize occupants and farmhand? Thatís kind of dated in screenplay these days. Pg. 2 Your contd isn't formatted correctly. It should... read
  • A review of ALBUMOLOGY
    by Mr. Cinema on 04/03/2013
    Itís always fun when you complete a screenplay. Based on the synopsis I immediately imagined Bruce Willis playing in this. Now, on to the review. Everything I write will be in real time and you can take my notes however you see fit. Pg. 3 One of the things I always pay attention to is does writer format their script decently? So far Iíd say you do but donít forget to space... read
  • by Mr. Cinema on 03/06/2013
    Truthfully, Iím not much of a soccer fan but Iím a fan of comedy, so you had me at comedy. Down below, Iíll list ideas and pure honesty as I read. Do not take my comments as being mean, I am only trying to help. Also take these notes however you see fit. Now letís get this review started. Pg.1 Thereís no need to fade out at the beginning of the script. Also thereís no need... read
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Comments About Mr. Cinema 39

  • mbannonb on 06/26/2013

    Thanks for the feedback on Party Hackers!
  • htxp on 06/23/2013

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  • blogan6814 on 06/23/2013

    I went through yesterday, sorry for the, lateness and couldn't find any others. So looks like I made a mountain out of a molehill!
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