a screenplay
by mrdotcom
Josh goes on a roadtrip to see his ex-girlfriend get married. A comedy of errors ensues, or something like that... more
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A review of One Dayby mrdotcom on 06/29/2004One Day is filled with cliched dialogue and descriptions of scenes that belong in a book. In a screenplay you're not supposed to give your own opinions, reactions and suppositions. Descriptions in a screenplay should describe the scene, as to allow for the director his own creative interpretation. Unfortunately, One Day leaves little room for a director to work without changing... read
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