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Reviews by MSchmidt13 92

  • by MSchmidt13 on 01/03/2011
    Aloha, amigo! Let’s boogie… 2 - It’s a pretty good sign when the second line of your script can make me laugh out loud. 7 - I think that last scene works better this time around. 8 - Dang, yo, Ted’s a total villainous mother fucker. Kind of abrupt. 15 - Love that scene. 16 - And it gets better. The pitfalls of our antag’s comedic foils works so well when you pair it with... read
  • by MSchmidt13 on 11/16/2010
    Aloha! First things first, guys. Your title has way too many fucking numbers in it. In fact, I never allow numbers to dictate when I do or don’t do something. That’s why I always randomize their order to keep mother fuckers on their toes. So, just forget all the numbers ‘cause that’s what I do and I just go when I feel like it. You should replace them all with exclamation... read
  • A review of The F Line
    by MSchmidt13 on 11/12/2010
    Aloha! As much as I would like this to be a full comedy I was fully aware that it was probably going to be more of a serious adventure story. The disparity between the raunchiness of the highs and the bleakness of the lows was, however, not something that I was expecting. This is a great concept for a comedy. Two stoners mixed up in a murder plot trying to get out by the time... read
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Comments About MSchmidt13 118

  • nick74 on 05/02/2011

    DAMMIT! Why didn't I think of the AT-AT?
  • A.Tarkovsky on 03/17/2011

    You're welcome Mike, it was a pleasure reviewing your screenplay, i liked it very much and i took "Fleas" to review without assignment as i like your writing and wish to read a story like that.
    Best of all
  • dbenamor on 01/16/2011

    Hi Mike,
    I should be in LA mid-Feb to early March. I'll be there for 2 weeks visiting apartments and such from Feb 6th-18th.

    Check out my editing reel:

    My contact info is at the end of it, either way give me a ring if you're in Cali, it'd be nice to chat with a fellow writer/director.
    Dan B
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