a short film
by mudphlappx
The Pickup is a film noir short about a man who pretends to be someone else and learns too late that little lies... more
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Submissions by mudphlappx
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a short film by mudphlappxQuiet Man: the Silent Genius of Ashley Cooper is a mockumentary recounting the tragic story of a man who rejects... more
Reviews by mudphlappx 9
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A review of Writes Of Passageby mudphlappx on 12/30/2007I like the focus of this piece and can see the potential in it. The people interviewed are all interesting and put forth a point of view that could work well in a short documentary. Unfortunately, there are problems with the execution of this short film. As I watched I couldn't help thinking it is simply unfinished. Here's the list of issues I jotted down as I watched:... read -
A review of Goombahsby mudphlappx on 07/31/2007My initial reaction to this short has to do with the acting. I think each of the actors did a good job. The voices/accents were executed well and their general demeanor fits with most "goombah" gangster movies. I think the story, though very short, has a funny premise. How often can someone say his sauce saved his life? I mean, come on.... I think there are problems with... read
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A review of Mix CDby mudphlappx on 07/27/2007I think the story idea behind this short could work, but not in its present form. The fact that the real story doesn't begin until about 2/3 of the way through the piece is a problem. I need to get the shared moments between the two characters much earlier so this film isn't just an exercise in dancing around to different kinds of music. (While I'm on the dancing: I didn't... read
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