muis
member since 07/30/2003 |
last login 08/10/2012
Screenwriter from The Netherlands. Recently I started to write in english, which obviously isn't my native language. As of now, I'm still learning, but who knows... maybe someday I can use a bit of europe in my Hollywood plays ;)...
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Screenwriter from The Netherlands. Recently I started to write in english, which obviously isn't my native language. As of now, I'm still learning, but who knows... maybe someday I can use a bit of europe in my Hollywood plays ;)
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Reviews by muis 3
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A review of i WanT tO kiLLby muis on 09/21/2009I liked this screenplay a lot. You did a good job setting up his story. I especially like Selena's remark at the beginning about Ned not burning down the house by accident - and eventually Ned disposing of his former life by burning it down on purpose. The dialogs were well written. I'm not too sure about the use of character names in the dialogs. Like "Ned, you lazy..." Seems... read -
A review of The Terrible Tale of Christopher Manningby muis on 08/18/2003The story had me flipping the pages, but it's not a great story. Unfortunately the first things that went through my mind were: too much description, poor characters and poor formatting.Throughout the story your descriptions (especially the theater ones) are twice as long as theyshould be. That's why your SP is 125 pages long. You describe everything, from carpet color to doorknobs... read
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Comments About muis 2
gordonkris on 09/21/2009
gordonkris on 09/21/2009
Thanks for the helpful notes and welcome to Triggerstreet.
Chris