mwiings 

member since 01/23/2009 | last login 02/22/2013

Imaginary wandering word weaver. If that is what people think when my time on this plane is done I will have done a 'fine' job on earth. Short stories are my current comfort zone, one day I'll grow a little and break...

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Imaginary wandering word weaver. If that is what people think when my time on this plane is done I will have done a 'fine' job on earth. Short stories are my current comfort zone, one day I'll grow a little and break out of that. I have dabbled in poetry before. Part of the reason I write though, is so that I do not have to tell stories about myself so that's it for now. May all you need to know be found in the fabric of my tales.

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Reviews by mwiings 32

  • mwiings
    Not Love at First Sight Credited Review
    A review of Thy Will Be Done
    by mwiings on 02/22/2013
    When I first started reading this I was a little thrown by the voice and I even pulled out my pen to start making corrections and page one and two suffered however, once I reached page three I "got it" and there isnt a mark after "when?" and I must say I am a fan and it ended too early. This was very well executed and the only correction I feel you should make is on page two... read
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    Ignorance Isnt Bliss Credited Review
    A review of The Cascade ( Revised )
    by mwiings on 02/21/2013
    This story was brief and had punch. An enjoyable read overall. I did pause on the first sentence over the use of the word “stood” in that context but I believe it makes the scene more “statuesque” and on my second read it fit a lot better and I wasn’t jarred out of the scene. I do think that Foster would have been better served with more description on him as a person and... read
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    Dont forget the moral in the tale Credited Review
    A review of Das Leben Dieb
    by mwiings on 12/11/2011
    I simply love this story. I am a fan of faery tales and this is a wonderful way of weaving it into a modern “story” without losing its tale-like quality. As I love it so much there are only 2 things I can think of to improve it. Your imagery is very strong and there was only one scene that didn’t work for me: in the beginning when Bill strokes his wife’s tummy she hums to... read
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Comments About mwiings 12

  • Wilsun
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    Wilsun on 02/22/2013


    Thanks for your time, patience and feedback for my story Thy Will Be Done.

    Wilson
  • Tripsheet Revision
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    Tripsheet Revision on 01/26/2012

    If I suggested, or even hinted, that I thought you couldn't write then I ask you here and now to accept my apology. It's mean spirited to discourage people, and so if I did that then shame on me. Tom
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    mollyazami on 11/08/2011

    Hi Mwiings,

    Thank you so much for your review of Marvin. I had never considered starting somewhere else nor reworking Marvin's angst. You definitely gave me some things to think about.

    I love your bio by the way :-)

    Thanks again,
    Molly
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