Writing, producing, creating, and studying in NYC. Learning much from the brilliance that surrounds me. "There's a difference between not believing in anything and believing in nothing."...
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Writing, producing, creating, and studying in NYC. Learning much from the brilliance that surrounds me. "There's a difference between not believing in anything and believing in nothing."
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A review of Goodbyeby nycdi on 11/16/2009I've watched "Goodbye" and, though I see that it was uploaded in 2005, I have some feedback for you. The story is very good and feels complete. What happens too often with short films is either the script is inadequate and doesn't have enough going on, or the filmmaker tries to cram too much into a story which would've been better developed as a feature. This one was just... read
A review of Act Your Ageby nycdi on 05/12/2009Oh dear. I thought the idea as expressed in the logline seemed promising. However, it falls apart pretty quickly. I'm not sure where to begin. I was wondering just how old the writer is, because the situations, characters, and dialogue just seem so immature or inexperienced. For example, you tried to paint the makeup artist job that Hayley has as demeaning drudgery. Yet,... read
A review of The Seanceby nycdi on 03/15/2009So much potential - good setup, nice pacing, excellent camera and lighting work, but it just goes nowhere, really. This feels more like a teaser that would go in front of the titles in a longer film. So, while I enjoyed it, and wanted more, it is incomplete. If only there were even just a few more minutes where something, anything, happens! If the young guy had been more... read