nature vs. nurture. which will win?
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write, rewrite, rewrite again. Hope that it comes out better than I imagined....
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write, rewrite, rewrite again. Hope that it comes out better than I imagined.
Submissions by patrick thompson
Reviews by patrick thompson 794
A review of Penis Envy (NEW DRAFT)by patrick thompson on 10/31/2012While i like the idea of a talking cock... i found this to be a fairly standard romantic comedy with nods to Judd Apatow that never delivered on the promise of a raunchy adult rom-com. Below are the comments I made while reading the script. Good luck with this and future projects. _______________________________________ 1. I have no idea he has a problem with his penis... read
A review of The Wrong Dayby patrick thompson on 02/12/2010I enjoyed reading this story but imagine that i will soon forget it. While it was well written there was nothing in the story to really grab my attention. But that's okay. Not everything should be flashy and throat squeezing. A couple of sentences could use a little tightening and the meter maid's dialogue seemed to be missing a word - but otherwise a fine read. i look forward... read
A review of First Contactby patrick thompson on 02/10/2010This was a tight and well written story. Sure, a few sentences could be edited but overall not bad. My only major grip is that the "twist" was predictable from the first page. By not giving the aliens names you have given the reader a reason to suspect your decision. "Surely, this writer would name his characters... unless, that would give away the twist". and from there I'm... read