Paul Clarke 

member since 06/15/2010 | last login 10/08/2014

Combining a love of movies and an vivid imagination to hopefully create some interesting stories. Looking for somewhere to exchange ideas and hopefully get some clues as to what I'm doing right and what I'm doing wrong....

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Combining a love of movies and an vivid imagination to hopefully create some interesting stories. Looking for somewhere to exchange ideas and hopefully get some clues as to what I'm doing right and what I'm doing wrong.

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Reviews by Paul Clarke 76

  • by Paul Clarke on 07/30/2013
    Well, you have an interesting story here. It is very, very dark. So be aware that it may be a hard sell. Child abuse, rape, you have the works. While there is some good writing and nice moments, the entire thing is held back by one huge problem. You’re not telling a story, you’re telling two separate stories. Even though one character is in both, they are completely unrelated... read
  • A review of Mottephobia
    by Paul Clarke on 07/12/2013
    Well done. A nice read. Something that I can imagine seeing on the big screen. A good example of something the same as what we’ve seen before, but different. For my liking, it just wasn’t quite different enough. My advice would be to work on two things: Firstly, the originality. The idea of giant killer moths is cool and unique (I think). But in your script they don’t really... read
  • A review of Children Not Admitted
    by Paul Clarke on 06/24/2013
    I’m sorry but this simply wasn’t my kind of script. I like stories where stuff happens, so you’re always going to struggle to impress me with a plain talking heads script. However, it is possible with great interesting characters that I care about, in interesting situations. Unfortunately the only character I liked was Murray. He was the only one with any common sense, and... read
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Comments About Paul Clarke 56

  • ReneeSmith on 07/18/2013

    Thank you for your thorough review of The MC The MD & Me. Your comments were spot on and will help with the rewrite. All the best to you and take care.
  • stephjones on 02/18/2013

    Hey Paul,

    Thank you for such a great review on Chickin Lickin. It's a first draft and was the hardest frigging screenplay for me to write. Your review will help me get it on the right track. It's a struggle to find the line between having Emily be a wimp who needs to stand up for herself, yet stay likeable. Even I want to kick her ass :)
    thanks again!
    all the best,
    steph
  • Savene on 12/28/2012

    The pleasure was all mine. I'm excited to read your next draft. If you need help, I'd be more than willing to work with you. No writer's credit necessary.
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