Phil Maker 

member since 04/07/2007 | last login 11/27/2007

I'm a Screenwiter/Director from Florida, now living in West Hollywood. I wrote, shot and am now editing my first film. I'm married to a famous author/screenwriter from Finland. I look forward to a long and productive career in the entertainment industry. I...

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I'm a Screenwiter/Director from Florida, now living in West Hollywood. I wrote, shot and am now editing my first film. I'm married to a famous author/screenwriter from Finland. I look forward to a long and productive career in the entertainment industry. I write from the heart.

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Reviews by Phil Maker 5

  • Phil Maker
    Awkward Credited Review
    A review of IN LOVE AND WAR (rev 2)
    by Phil Maker on 09/18/2007
    Starts off a little bit awkward. The way it’s written A COTTAGE and SHORE. It’s jarring to read that way. Try it as a mini slug line like this: A COTTAGE -- sits perched a... Description is a bit awkward -- ...damn proud of its four street lights? How do we know? How does the camera SEE that it’s damn proud? I don’t think you’re conveying the exact meaning you want to convey... read
  • Phil Maker
    I respect the effort Non Credited Review
    A review of Crime Line
    by Phil Maker on 09/11/2007
    The script starts off by saying they “...surround the scene of the crime” What crime? You can only write precisely what we see. What the camera sees. If there’s a crime all we need to know is what we see. It’s redundant to tell us there’s a crime and then show us the dead bodies. Just show the dead bodies. It’s more powerful too. Just a little F.Y.I. I won’t sit here and talk... read

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