philbklyn 

member since 12/04/2008 | last login 03/11/2010

I am a 38 year old construction worker from Brooklyn, New York....

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I am a 38 year old construction worker from Brooklyn, New York.

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Reviews by philbklyn 244

  • by philbklyn on 12/16/2009
    The first paragraph was confusing to me. On the second page -- Was Tabitha really older than Miss Jones? Miss Jones is portrayed well, however, the stripper that is saving up for law school sounds a bit cliched. Things started getting interesting on page 7, with the man and the suitcase. the growing suitcase was not what I expected. The POV switch to Tabitha was a little... read
  • A review of Flamingo Plaza
    by philbklyn on 12/12/2009
    This was a well written story and a very enjoyable read. Even though I wasn't born yet in 1948, I felt a bit of nostalgia. I liked the mix of description, action, and thoughts -- very nice. I do have to say however that it was missing a plot, and therefore made it a memoir more than a short story -- of course there are no memoirs on this site, so I will have to give this... read
  • A review of Restoration
    by philbklyn on 12/12/2009
    The first sentence had me yawning, but then the character's thoughts came next and it was an excellent contrast -- very nice. I liked the way you showed the character's traits without interrupting the narrative flow. The stories about the garden and the family went together perfectly, and the ending was cute. This piece was well written and interesting. This review is short... read
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Comments About philbklyn 73

  • OmarF on 07/30/2014

    BTW, the novel is titled, Scorched. Not Scorching, which is the short story's title.
  • OmarF on 07/30/2014

    Hey Phil,
    A while back, you reviewed my short story, Scorching, and found it interesting but incomplete. You wanted more of a story and more depth about the character. Well, I've since expanded it into a novel and have put it up on Amazon as a Kindle book. With the much expanded room I've been able to add a lot more shades to the character, and more actual story. If you're interested I'd like to hear what you have to say about it, and perhaps you'd like to write a review of it.

    --Omar
  • WildIrishRose on 04/29/2010

    Many thanks for your reveiw of Strength of a Woman The Realisation I have tuned in after some time and neglected to send you a thankyou. All the best with your work. Caroline
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