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  • A review of Road Kill
    by phillbarron on 05/08/2006
    Stylistically, this is a very well written script. There's nothing in the way this is written that snaps me out of the read, it just flows superbly from beginning to end. The story too, is a great premise; the logical steps Martin takes from mild mannered to murderer are smooth and mostly believable. Mostly. The one thing I don't really get is the vulture; what was the vulture... read
  • by phillbarron on 04/18/2006
    You have a very fluid writing style, which allows for an easy read. Your action lines are snappy and contain exactly the right amount of information, I didn't feel like I was missing anything or you were over explaining stuff. I did think the set-up could much more succinct; by page 33 there was still no sign of any difficulties on the horizon. To be honest, I felt like the... read
  • A review of Homeland Conspiracy
    by phillbarron on 02/08/2006
    Very funny script, I found myself giggling most of the way through; a great parody of a xenophobic action movie. I love the ridiculousness of the IRA, Cuba and Al Qaeda co-operating with each other and taking orders from China; I was almost expecting Elvis to be the mastermind behind it all. I did feel that it falls apart a little in the last act though; the end of Jacobson... read
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Comments About phillbarron 30

  • jwest on 09/27/2010

    Jac shoots her hand up for Barbados!

  • jwest on 09/27/2010

    Ahem. :D
  • jwest on 11/05/2009

    Okey dokey. :)

    Hope you and the familia are all good. Have a great weekend!

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