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God & Science

A review of Gods In Training

by Rados on 06/04/2012

What a great story. It seethes and oozes with intelligence. You mix biblical references with scientific ones very well and draw great duality and parallels. Tay Cloy is an awkward name, but it all fits together when an explanation comes in. It kind of reminded me of The Watchmen and the big blue guy. There's some similarities to what we would see in a graphic novel. This... read

Skewed By A Language Barrier

A review of Blood Money

by Rados on 06/04/2012

You write impressively well in English. However, there may be a cultural and grammatical disadvantage for the reader. Some words are used inappropriately while certain contractions seem wrong, like "who're". It would be much more coherent if you just said "who are". You're use of some Western slang works well at times and not so well at others. With the minor flaws in English,... read

Angelic Cliche

A review of The Angel of Woodward Avenue

by Rados on 04/12/2012

This story is well written. The concept, however, seems recycled. I could swear that I've almost read a story like this before. My only recommendation would be to slightly change the plot, while keeping the general idea intact. All stories should have a mystic quality, and yours definitely succeeds at that. You're a good writer, but that doesn't matter. You also need a unique... read

Interesting

A review of The Saracen Locket

by Rados on 12/12/2011

This story evolves into a distrubing horror. The final moments were slightly unexpected: lips ripped off, a monster tearing his head off. All very well done. The idea that this is "tedious" work and that these characters may have been immortal, is very interesting. I enjoyed the addition of the man being in love with her; that added a richness to the story. The dialogue,... read

Free Flowing Imagination

A review of The Dark Passenger Never Answered

by Rados on 12/10/2011

A truly enigmatic story. It leaves the reader with questions but also leaves us mesmerized by the beauty of the prose. It's poetic, metaphorical, and artistic. Some areas seem non-sensical, just because of the way in which some words are used. Other times, it makes perfect and clear sense. It's hard for me to pinpoint the method that you used to write this. It may have been... read

Tension Mounts

A review of Beauty and the Beast (rev)

by Rados on 12/04/2011

Throughout the whole story, there is a tension. Wondering when he's going to use the gun. His vocabulary is infantile, and I'm hoping this was intentional. He's got a typical teenage angst, which is probably reflective of many teens nowadays. He sometimes reminds me of how I used to be, and sometimes still am. You grasped modern internet culture when writing this; good job... read

My Thoughts Are My Reality

A review of The Lover

by Rados on 12/04/2011

I'm working with a similar theme on my novel as you did in this story. I love how this ends. I think your short story is very relevant to what modern dating and socializing is in 2011. You've done a great job of misleading the reader and taking us on a surprising trip. The ending and revelation were well executed. Good job. I enjoyed it. The illusions and manifestations that... read

Better to Reflect

A review of Reflections

by Rados on 12/04/2011

I'm kind of a darker soul and would have enjoyed a darker story, but what you have done here is good. Had I written the story, she would have went to LA and fulfilled her dark destiny. I would have chosen the route of regret as the climax and the dark plot of a dark story. In my opinion, it would have been more effective. One movie disturbed me so much because of its dark,... read

Blogged

A review of The Reptile

by Rados on 03/27/2011

Since this is a blog entry, or so it is written, I won't judge it too much on grammar. It's funny that blogs can pass with grammar problems and how most people will let technical issues slide through cracks when it comes to things posted on the internet. You offered a funny little story about a lizard in the kitchen. Whether it was true or not, it was amusing. This sentence... read

Step Away From Your Asshole

A review of TOTAL ASSHOLE ACCEPTANCE ™

by Rados on 03/23/2011

From the beginning, this story's title clued me in that this was going to be an out-of-the-ordinary piece of fiction. The structure itself and how you lay out the powerpoints is interesting. However, I found it to read more like, well...an actual powerpoint presentation. It's kind of interesting actually. This story, like the seminar, pulls no punches. Or does it? Maybe... read

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