Rados 

member since 09/04/2009 | last login 06/16/2013

A writer, fascinated by the darkest elements of human nature. As writers, the stories we tell and the ways in which we choose to tell them are our own. I don't expect or intend to please everyone. http://www.ryanrados.com...

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A writer, fascinated by the darkest elements of human nature. As writers, the stories we tell and the ways in which we choose to tell them are our own. I don't expect or intend to please everyone. http://www.ryanrados.com

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Reviews by Rados 47

  • A review of Gods In Training
    by Rados on 06/04/2012
    What a great story. It seethes and oozes with intelligence. You mix biblical references with scientific ones very well and draw great duality and parallels. Tay Cloy is an awkward name, but it all fits together when an explanation comes in. It kind of reminded me of The Watchmen and the big blue guy. There's some similarities to what we would see in a graphic novel. This... read
  • A review of Blood Money
    by Rados on 06/04/2012
    You write impressively well in English. However, there may be a cultural and grammatical disadvantage for the reader. Some words are used inappropriately while certain contractions seem wrong, like "who're". It would be much more coherent if you just said "who are". You're use of some Western slang works well at times and not so well at others. With the minor flaws in English,... read
  • by Rados on 04/12/2012
    This story is well written. The concept, however, seems recycled. I could swear that I've almost read a story like this before. My only recommendation would be to slightly change the plot, while keeping the general idea intact. All stories should have a mystic quality, and yours definitely succeeds at that. You're a good writer, but that doesn't matter. You also need a unique... read
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Comments About Rados 24

  • mwiings on 01/26/2012

    Thank you for your review of The Saracen Locket.

    I did want any dialogue to have a slightly formal feel to it, although "old" isnt a complete fail.

    Thanks again.
  • Wisdom Davi on 12/21/2011

    Greetings Rados,

    I would never take your comments with a grain of salt. You have taken the time to review Purple Haze, and to make a contribution to helping me become a better writer. On the bar between horrible and remarkable you have put me in the middle. That means I am half way there (smile).

    Oh btw, I won't loose any sleep over it either. I'm not sure if this is a good trait for a writer, but I can sleep through anything..LOL (yes really laughing).

    I say all this just to say..Thank you!

    Regards,

    Wis
  • MaxWatt on 12/10/2011

    Many thanks for the review, I appreciate your time and effort.
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