A funny story I wrote about getting a tattoo. I was just being silly and thought I would share the experiance with... more
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Reviews by ravensdragonfly 55
A review of Elementalby ravensdragonfly on 03/28/2011I found myself not wanting to stop reading. I kept wanting to know what happens next and that is the hallmark of a very good book. The way you intertwined the elements and stories at the begining of each chapter with what was going on in this mans life was an interesting concept. Admittedly it went over my head at first (I am not the sharpest tool in the shed at times). I am... read
A review of The Sown (rev)by ravensdragonfly on 03/10/2011WoW! This story held my attention from beggining to end! usually I tend to get detracted but not this time. Your writing is captivating and excellent. I love the way you kept building and building letting the situation grow more tense, you have perfect timing for this, well done! your grammar seemed imepecable. I only ran across two spelling errors; On page 5 - you wrote -... read
A review of Relife/Bandana-- rewriteby ravensdragonfly on 03/09/2011What a wonderful little story! Your writing is getting better with each story you write and I am truely enjoying reading each one and watching how you progress. I loved how you paralleled the bandana in each characters life - it gives the reader a warm and fuzzy feeling. the only adivce I can offer: 1) You wrote - “What is that for?” The boy asked, fascinated by his youthful... read