redraven23 

member since 08/04/2009 | last login 01/17/2010

I'm a 23 year old Film Student with the Academy of Art University. I'm married with one daughter and another child on the way. I former military and an EMT with a local Private Ambulance Agency. I am looking foward to a...

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I'm a 23 year old Film Student with the Academy of Art University. I'm married with one daughter and another child on the way. I former military and an EMT with a local Private Ambulance Agency. I am looking foward to a thunderous career in film someday.

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Reviews by redraven23 2

  • redraven23
    Kind of Wierd Non Credited Review
    A review of Dead Concious.
    by redraven23 on 08/04/2009
    I think there is a great story somewhere in here. It all seemed a bit awkward though. How did he get to where he was at? Was it something that was all of a sudden or was it a gradual decline to where he started hallucinating? Lighting was not very good at all. the lead was drowned out in white and it looked like he wasn't wearing a shirt and had writing on his chest up until... read
  • redraven23
    Not too Shabby Non Credited Review
    A review of Friend or Foe
    by redraven23 on 08/04/2009
    Well, I would say that considering, from what I understand, that this is one of the first films you've worked on, I think you did a pretty decent job. I wouldn't get to down about the actors. I've learned that a good editor/director can make horrible actors shine and a horrible editor/director can make the greatest actors look horrible. It's all in how you put the film together... read

Comments About redraven23 1

  • gapoz
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    gapoz on 08/13/2009

    Hi Red. Just wanted to drop a note and congratulate you on getting your first film done. My review limit for the day is exhausted so I could not do an official review. It is very hard to do a silent film and convey a substantial story, but you pulled it off. The ending was a funny twist that changed the shape of everything we had been expecting. Nice. The film suffered a bit from some pans that were a little too fast and caused some blurring, but that may have partly been from compression issues. The acting was a bit exaggerated in spots (when they guy yawns, when the girl sits on the bench), but due to it being a silent film it's not uncommon to push these actions a bit. As a first film this is a commendable effort I bet you learned much from. Best of luck with new projects. Getting out and doing them is the best teacher.

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