a screenplay
by richardsscottj
Scott Maxwell, a bored husband in his mid thirties, has asked his wife to do the unthinkable. In order to save... more
richardsscottj
member since 08/31/2008 |
last login 09/27/2009
I was a part of Triggerstreet during it's inital launch. I left the site because I really felt the peers at the time where not helpful to each other. I have returned because I continue to hear good things about the site...
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I was a part of Triggerstreet during it's inital launch. I left the site because I really felt the peers at the time where not helpful to each other. I have returned because I continue to hear good things about the site and wanted the chance to get some more exposure for a couple spec scripts I have in the works. Visit my IMDB page at http://www.imdb.com/name/nm2399288/
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Reviews by richardsscottj 9
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A review of Through Hell, For Sara (v5)by richardsscottj on 09/01/2009I really don't have a lot of complaints about this really smart, original screenplay. The concept was top notch, the dialogue was rather believable and extremely funny. I really enjoyed the dynamic between Chad and Will. I usually don't touch formatting, but unlike a lot of scripts on here formatting was right on the nose. I think that's worth mentioning because with a script... read -
A review of Rebirthby richardsscottj on 08/25/2009I'm doing a free will, on this. I know there is some questionable ethics, since I read this script before it was placed on Triggerstreet. The script is on Simply Scripts, and it's for the most part the same draft with some differences. Since I have read, and enjoyed the following script then there is absolutely no reason why I can't review it. First of all you have to look... read
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A review of Brothers In Armsby richardsscottj on 08/19/2009Of the screenplays I have read so far in my journeys on Triggerstreet this one felt the most original. I need to give you kudos for that. It had, and maybe I got something from it that really wasn't there, but a futuristic Guy Ritchie vibe. That's something I really kind of enjoyed about the screenplay. In regards to characters I enjoyed Dominic and Sarah for that matter too... read
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Hi Richard,
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Thanks for your comment and for not ripping me a new one. I know my review was harsh. And it was harsh not so much about content but rather format. I can certainly appreciate you trying to go against the grain. But I was trying to be brutally honest about a professional reader having problems with your script (not necessarily the story) on page 1. Frankly I'm tired of going to screenplay classes and being told "you must have your instigating scene by page 10, crisis clear by page 30, 2nd crisis by page 60, blah blah blah." I'd encourage you to read my Top Ten script LOCK THE DOOR. I said "fuck all" to those conventions and turned up the tension by page 1. It's thrown most reviewers for a loop, but they've reacted positively to it. Personally I'd love to see a movie that builds and builds from the opening minute. Incidentally, LTD is also about vampires. :-)
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Hi LOL Dave likes it rough.
+ more commentsdbenamor on 09/01/2009
You just made my day. Thanks for the review.
Dan Benamor
**DELETED ACCOUNT** on 08/27/2009
As far as your podcast goes, thank you for the invite. My first career was in radio, and I miss that industry, but to be honest I'm a little too busy right now to participate in something like that. Perhaps another time. Best of luck to you...honestly.
-Duncan
tishanddavid on 08/25/2009
Why people wouldn't be able to get that Scott is the bad guy is beyond me.
I think you have a great script and its one of the few on here that I really can see on the big screen.If you haven't yet read unmasked (on our favs list) I think you would love it.Its a similar guise.
And we will be putting YOU on our favs list.
Thanks and again good luck!!
Tisha
(the better kisser out of the two of us:)