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A review of Noreen the Show Catby ron gannon on 11/28/2013Easy to follow and very enjoyable. Your visuals were excellent: her upside-down sleeping position, tumbling across the pavement in a Ferris wheel of feathers, Lil stopped in her tracks to act like she wasn’t following. To list a few of many. Excellent writing. Think about: Well, Lil, it's been a pleasure. Oh, Miss Noreen. Wow! Miss Noreen. Yeah, I'm hungry. Well, nice meeting... read
A review of Four girlsby ron gannon on 11/28/2013I'll review this as a short story, although it's a short script. You can post short scripts on Zoetrope.com. Killing 2 best friends over a guy? You Swedish girls are unforgiving. I take it Kate came up with the idea of killing them. I suggest showing the first murder. Then have the 2nd before they bury Maria. The quote "Yeah, I don't want to, get more dirt on my clothes"... read
A review of The Candy Manby ron gannon on 11/26/2013I liked your writing style and it kept my interest. I thought the following was pretty good. 'Shelli Witherspoon was a good girl, perfect in almost every way. She really was. Her mother said so.' After a dozen autopsies the poison wasn't noticed? Then it was extremely noticeable? Can't understand what the following meant: 'Chief among her these was that candy ...' Over... read