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A review of Dargonby ron gannon on 03/19/2014I liked the beginning and the introduction of the Sisters. Then it got very confusing even after re-reading. I read this a month ago and didn't review it because it was so confusing. Starting about here: The deed ended up being done at the New Year's party place. Duggan wasn't there, he just...couldn't. Is the reader suppose to guess? An abortion at the party or a spell?... read
A review of The story of the Tattooby ron gannon on 03/15/2014I like your writing style. It was fun but what was the tattoo? Maybe surprise the reader with something we would never expect. Whatever ya want. Or the tattoo artists could show you a bunch of tattoos and you can give the reader your thoughts on them. With your keen sense of humor I bet you could come up with a few funny comments. Pick a tattoo and let the reader know at the... read
A review of Joan's Happy Faceby ron gannon on 03/15/2014It kept my interest and moved along nicely. At first I thought it took place in Baltimore, Maryland. I suggest letting the reader know it's in Ireland. 'Mum' did make me check to see if there is a Baltimore, Ireland. Also I suggest: For a thirteen year old girl. I thought she was a boy at first. Enjoying that first cigarette certainly didn't ring true to this reader. I recall... read