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A review of Reliefby ron gannon on 01/23/2014An interesting little read that kept my interest all the way. The shooting was a surprise. I liked it. I thought the writing was very good. It was easy to follow and I didn't have to go back and reread something (like I had to do in most of the short stories I read here). I don't have any suggestions on the story. I suggest you consider, "I stepped quickly out into the hallway... read
A review of The Prisoner with the Gold-Flecked Eyesby ron gannon on 12/14/2013At first the poor grammar was very distracting - especially at the beginning. It did get better except for punctuation, capitals, and just about anything a teacher would circle red. After a few pages I went back and started over again, trying to ignore the poor writing. To start with: 'So. Much. Blood.' isn't a sentence. And you started a new paragraph with the last part... read
A review of Eating Away At Meby ron gannon on 12/12/2013Original and fun. I liked it. I got a kick of him worrying about the carpet while being eaten alive. The writing is very good - very unusual here. I suggest describing her. I was confused by, "She tightens her white hot grip." Other than that no complaints and I can't think of any suggestions that would improve it. I also like how you gave the reasons why he was being... read