Russ2007 

member since 09/18/2007 | last login 01/17/2015

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  • A review of Famous Frank
    by Russ2007 on 11/10/2014
    STORY/PLOT - OPENING TWENTY FIVE PAGES: Enjoying the read so far. It's easy, and it's flowing quickly due to the format, and how it's laid out on the page. There's plenty of white. Frank has been thrown a dilemma in the form of the family business which came about through Justin's death. An interesting development with Jeremy being mistaken for Justin at the end of these... read
  • by Russ2007 on 11/08/2014
    OPENING TWENTY FIVE PAGES: Questions you need to ask yourself: Do they establish the tone of the story? Do they set up the world this story is set in? Do these opening scenes hook and draw the reader into the world the characters live in? Are the opening pages written cleanly, efficiently and easy to follow? Are the character introductions long winded? STORY / PLOT: Is... read
  • A review of MAN CAVE
    by Russ2007 on 11/05/2014
    OPENING TWENTY FIVE PAGES: Questions you need to ask yourself: Do they establish the tone of the story? Do they set up the world this story is set in? Do these opening scenes hook and draw the reader into the world the characters live in? Are the opening pages written cleanly, efficiently and easy to follow? Are the character introductions long winded? STORY / PLOT: Is... read
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