RyanDee 

member since 03/30/2008 | last login 11/10/2009

Former Chicago vaudeville/burlesque artist living in LA. Contest Finalist Published Poet Published Short Story Writer Bankruptcy Paralegal In that order....

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Former Chicago vaudeville/burlesque artist living in LA. Contest Finalist Published Poet Published Short Story Writer Bankruptcy Paralegal In that order.

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Reviews by RyanDee 34

  • A review of The Chimera
    by RyanDee on 02/18/2009
    The Chimera is very good. It's one of the most unique screenplays I have read on Triggerstreet and it's very funny. Also, because of the absurdist angle that the piece takes, it's a little bit harder to give notes on, but I will do my best. I won't give notes on the style of story that you chose to tell so they might be a little bit lighter in tone, but I liked it a bunch... read
  • A review of The Noise of War
    by RyanDee on 02/07/2009
    Hello JakesWrites, Congrats on the noise of war. I loved it. This is one of those scripts that's so tight that it's going to be hard for me to find things to give notes on so, I apologize in advance. THE POSITIVES Concept is amazing. The idea of a forbidden love in your very well drawn Afghanistan is a true accomplishment. The subject matter requires a great deal of... read
  • A review of Down In The Bayou
    by RyanDee on 02/05/2009
    First of all let me say that you have chosen a very hard genre (kid's animation) and a very hard tone to pull off and it's done competently and by someone who clearly knows their way around a screenplay. In a way, DitB feels like a classic road movie with the gator and the crawfish trying to get to their prospective goals but in practice, it feels a bit disjointed and repetitive... read
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Comments About RyanDee 17

  • **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 09/30/2009

    Thanks for reviewing Masterpiece Nightmare. It's reviews like yours why we put our scripts up here. Thank you.
  • Wild Card on 05/19/2009

    Thanks for the kind words, Ryan. It was completely unexpected, but I'm thrilled nonetheless. Hopefully another one of your works will pop up in my assignment generator soon, eh?

    -Paul
  • kepow on 03/19/2009

    Hi, Ryan. I see you live in L.A. and I was wondering if you knew about this:

    http://bulletin.triggerstreet.com/viewtopic.php?t=46462&start=180&postdays=0&postorder=asc&highlight=

    You're welcome to attend any and all of the activities planned, but if you wish to join us at lucky strike, I will need to know your probability of attendance (maybe, probably, or definately), the approximate number of guests you might bring with you and your e-mail address, which you can give by hitting "contact me" on my TS page.

    Hope to see you there!



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