Sanjuro The BAMF 

member since 03/05/2008 | last login 02/09/2012

I am a connoisseur of high quality works such as Le Samourai and Youtube Poop. I like potatoes and often discuss the rich history of the tuberous crop with family and friends, much to their ennui. My favorite singer is Bob Dylan,...

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I am a connoisseur of high quality works such as Le Samourai and Youtube Poop. I like potatoes and often discuss the rich history of the tuberous crop with family and friends, much to their ennui. My favorite singer is Bob Dylan, although it's for his hair. The fact that he's a singer does not correlate with why I like him (for his hair). I drive a cardboard Maserati Spyder with a quad-core Alienware PC that I use in concert with bi-weekly mobile LAN parties I host with my friends (who happen to be invisible).

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Reviews by Sanjuro The BAMF 38

  • by Sanjuro The BAMF on 06/19/2009
    Am I right or wrong when I ask if this script was written in a spree? It’s not a bad thing (look how long it took Paul Schrader to write Taxi Driver), but it seemed like many details were put in as soon as they were thought out. The feeling I got is that the script was written by someone who has an almost instinctual sense of story and structure, but didn’t put much effort... read
  • A review of JOE AND THE UFO (Rev)
    by Sanjuro The BAMF on 06/16/2009
    There is way too much going on in this script. I found myself lost or confused on more than a few occasions. It felt like you were writing it on the go, instead of outlining the story before filling it in with details. It’s 115 pages, but I see only 60 pages worth of content. So many scenes can be done without. The number one problem is that you have too many characters... read
  • by Sanjuro The BAMF on 05/30/2009
    Problem number one: there is no central protagonist or ensemble of protagonists. I certainly hope McCarthy wasn’t intended to be the protagonist. He makes a great villain, mostly because most people would want to inflict upon him a slow death. It’s like he hacks reality, as he has the upper hand at all times. If someone gets in his way, bang bang, problem solved. Going away... read
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Comments About Sanjuro The BAMF 15

  • Sanjuro The BAMF on 06/23/2009

    squib2012 wrote:
    I've been debating on the format for this as well - graphic novel might work, but at this point, I've grown so tired of working on it, I may just chalk it up as a learning experience and move onto something less sprawling..


    I've done that three times already. Apparently I'm a slow/non learner.
  • squib2012 on 06/23/2009

    Hey Sanjuro,

    much thanks for taking the time to read & review "Fall from Grace"

    thanks also for your voluminous feedback. Honestly, it helps to have some clarity of focus when tackling these things. This story was a monster to begin with, and I've been trying to cut it back and streamline it into a single story. very perceptive of you, by the way, picking up on its televisionesqueness.

    I've been debating on the format for this as well - graphic novel might work, but at this point, I've grown so tired of working on it, I may just chalk it up as a learning experience and move onto something less sprawling.

    at any rate, your commentary is much appreciated.

    best of fortune to you

    ps the Techno Viking makes me giggle.
  • Sanjuro The BAMF on 06/16/2009

    LesFloyd wrote:
    I can't tell if you're in character or not, or maybe I haven't read enough of you or about you?


    Nah, dude, I'm quoting Lawrence from Office Space.
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