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  theauthor on 06/17/2013

  The first two were just playing with characters. 'Original' was actually reported to the hall of justice for being 'an autobiography'. I never intended Rivers to be the main character, but he simply took over. He refuses to be second fiddle. I have had to get rid of Cole, but Andrew and Oscar will still be the Einstein duo who help Rivers. I am in the midst of a second version. The first half is done and I have the second half in my mind. I hope to finish before July. Thanks for reading.
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  theauthor on 06/14/2013

  My first real story is going well. I posted "Waves of Despair" as an intro. It is 9 pages and leads to a "to be continued". Let me know if you like it. I value your input.
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  theauthor on 06/04/2013

  I was so down today that I submitted my work "Original" for review.
  I'm just experimenting with submission. It is simply my voice.
  A bit odd with a sense of humor. I goofed off a lot in English class.

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Comments About Scarpelli73 8

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  theauthor on 06/17/2013

  The first two were just playing with characters. 'Original' was actually reported to the hall of justice for being 'an autobiography'. I never intended Rivers to be the main character, but he simply took over. He refuses to be second fiddle. I have had to get rid of Cole, but Andrew and Oscar will still be the Einstein duo who help Rivers. I am in the midst of a second version. The first half is done and I have the second half in my mind. I hope to finish before July. Thanks for reading.
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  theauthor on 06/14/2013

  My first real story is going well. I posted "Waves of Despair" as an intro. It is 9 pages and leads to a "to be continued". Let me know if you like it. I value your input.
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  theauthor on 06/04/2013

  I was so down today that I submitted my work "Original" for review.
  I'm just experimenting with submission. It is simply my voice.
  A bit odd with a sense of humor. I goofed off a lot in English class.
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  Justingray03 on 11/15/2012

  Hey,
  Sorry for the use of the word "Lame" I like your film. I said I did, I just was wanting more out of it. It was such a beautiful location that I wished it was used more to showcase the production value of your work. I didn't have anything loaded to my account cause I just opened it. Now I have a few uploaded now if you'd like to take a look. Hopefully I didn't anger you with my write up. Honestly I rewatched it and I do agree I was harsh. I tip my hat to anyone who makes films cause it is so hard. The only issues I still have with it is just not knowing what was so important about his work (the characters) and why it was such a great loss when it was removed.
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  imoveatparaderest on 11/04/2011

  Hahaha, I know, right? That's what they gave me, and to be honest I'm glad. You make good stories, and they're easy to review.
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  Johnstone82 on 07/07/2011

  Stakes!!!
  
  Hey, thanks a bunch for your thoughts on "Dungeon Master Olympics." One of the biggest hurdles I'm encountering with revisions are upping the stakes without it sounding too contrived or manufactured. I'm glad you brought that up again, because it reinforces what needs to be looked at. Also, I definitely hear you on the page count--I like to keep comedies under 100. This one was just a beast.
  
  Again, thanks. Your thoughts are much appreciated.
  
  Best,
  John
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  Christopher O'Rourke on 03/11/2011

  Thanks for taking the time to read and review "Out of the Badlands". You offered some good insight, and I'm glad you liked it overall. And welcome to Trigger Street!
  
  -Chris
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  Snuggle on 03/06/2011

  Thanks for your review of "Evil". There seems to be forming a pattern now in the opinions stated in the reviews I've received. Descriptions should be cut and story should be made "clearer" and more tense. I'll keep it in mind for future drafts and future work.
  
  Thanks again :)

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