Carl's embarrassed to be dating a young chick. He’s a Dingo. Like a Manther (male cougar) but less suave.
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I write short, breezy, irreverent comedies. And some artsy stuff, too. Oh. I also love 90's Nickelodean....
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I write short, breezy, irreverent comedies. And some artsy stuff, too. Oh. I also love 90's Nickelodean.
Submissions by sedawson4
Reviews by sedawson4 10
A review of What Happened To Billy's Balls? (V2)by sedawson4 on 08/11/2011OK, the title combined with the dog pictures made me laugh out loud from the beginning. I enjoyed this screenplay-- like your other one, it's well-written with short dialogue/descriptions that make it easy to read. Everyone had distinct personalities: Ronald was hilarious and cool. Billy's Mom was a friendly airhead. The Grandpa would definitely be a scene stealer if this was... read
A review of Lack of Directionby sedawson4 on 08/10/2011This was an interesting and quick read, but I think you can have a LOT more fun with it! Maybe read the Tropic Thunder script to get a better idea of just how crazy you can make hollywood characters in the movie-within-a-movie idea? A character like Les Grossman becomes an instant, hilarious classic... no reason why you can't make Levi more like him. Make Danny more meaty,... read
A review of Wrapped In Shadowsby sedawson4 on 08/09/2011What an interesting story, the ending literally had my mouth drop. A twisted, strange finale that really worked and came out of nowhere in those last few pages--fantastic! OK so, overall it was a fun read. Loved the length, the writing, the dialogue, the characters. It's funny because normally this kind of script wouldn't attract my attention, but as I progressed it just kept... read