seniormike 

member since 01/19/2005 | last login 11/01/2012

Mike here. Screenwriting is my thing. TriggerStreet's TriggLA reviews the first 15 pages of my script, The Farm! Watch here: http://www.triggla.tv/2011/07/the-first-15-ep-4-the-farm/ "All good storytelling comes down to people wanting to know what happens next. Then being surprised with what happens next."...

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Mike here. Screenwriting is my thing.

TriggerStreet's TriggLA reviews the first 15 pages of my script, The Farm! Watch here: http://www.triggla.tv/2011/07/the-first-15-ep-4-the-farm/

"All good storytelling comes down to people wanting to know what happens next. Then being surprised with what happens next."

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Reviews by seniormike 56

  • by seniormike on 09/02/2010
    STORY: Flowed smoothly, was able to envision the characters growing over the course of the acts. I liked how Brooksís goals changed with the circumstances she was dealtÖhow it was no longer about beating Amy but just riding again and how it would take more than just over coming her blindness to do so. CONCEPT: A nice fresh take on an overcoming the odds story. CHARACTER:... read
  • by seniormike on 08/27/2010
    STORY: Was hooked into the story right away. As a Sci-Fi fan, I like the mystery you set up right out of the gate. CONCEPT: As stated, Iím a Sci-Fi fan so the concept was a great match to my taste. Space mysteries are always fun when executed right. CHARACTER: John was a clear lead protagonist. I feel the story jumped too quickly into the past before you could develop... read
  • A review of The Carrier (rev.)
    by seniormike on 08/26/2010
    STORY: The story was pretty good with lots of action. My type of movie. It started off with a bang. There were a lot of characters at first so it was hard to keep track of them all and their importance to the story, but this would probably come across easier as a visual on screen. I liked Richterís background. Kellerís, on the other hand, didnít quite know what his motivation... read
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Comments About seniormike 25

  • CrabbyLady on 09/10/2010

    Oh okay - got it! It still was wonderfully funky that he married a Crop Person! Good job though - definitely keep going.
  • Tanneradam90 on 09/05/2010

    Thanks for taking time out to give feedback on "Candy"
  • bthielke on 09/05/2010

    thanks for your review of Sweetheart of the Rodeo, mike. I'll take your suggestions into account on my next inevitable rewrite. best of luck with your writing!!
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