shadesdown2001 

member since 07/19/2006 | last login 08/09/2008

I have been married for 13 years. I am the father of two wonderful boys, Zackery, 13 and Ryan, 11. Zackery, began acting at the age of 11 at a local outdoor drama with many famous and talented people. Ryan, just started...

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I have been married for 13 years. I am the father of two wonderful boys, Zackery, 13 and Ryan, 11. Zackery, began acting at the age of 11 at a local outdoor drama with many famous and talented people. Ryan, just started acting himself at the same outdoor drama. He has also decided he wants to be a singer and an actor and is currently taking singing and chorus classes in school. I enjoy writing song lyrics, books, and movie scripts. I have been writing song lyrics for over 18 years. I have been writing books and movie scripts since 2004, inspired by the works of J.K. Rowlings and with the help of my two children, who help in everyway. I have reached the first of numerous goals in life. I am the author of my first book, "Jack and Dennis' Amazing Vacation," which is a children's fiction now being sold on numerous websites, including Amazon.com and barnesandnoble.com. Two more of my goals now is to experience one of my screenplays as a movie on the big screen and one of my songs I have written heard on the radio. Another one of my biggest goals is to see my children on the big screen or on stage in front of millions, doing what they love and thats performing as actors and singers.

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Reviews by shadesdown2001 9

  • A review of Riders To The Sea
    by shadesdown2001 on 07/27/2008
    This script drags on way to long before it grabs the attention of the reader. All and all, it is a good story line but there are to many to mention confusing things happening that caused me to have to go back and re-read pages just to catch up... here are a few of those that I did jot down... Pg. 1 - Many of the enclosures contain sheep, cows, horses, and "not a few goats."... read
  • A review of Downfall
    by shadesdown2001 on 07/27/2008
    Although Downfall seems like a good story line, it seems a little copy cat from all those other movies made from 9-11. I have noticed quite a few mistakes throughout the script that needs to be changed. To many to post here but a reread by the writer would do this screenplay a world of good. Using profanity in dialog is accepted but to use it in ACTIONS - such as "ASS" on Pg... read
  • by shadesdown2001 on 10/30/2007
    The scene changes are very confusing. Right from the beginning, when Helen speaks about a scene then the scene changes to what she just spoke of repetitively causes the reader to lost track. ( HELEN Exterior. Fire escape of Rose’s apartment -dusk. As she does so, the scene appears in black and white film footage, starring CHARLES AND BETTY CHASE as RICHARD and ROSE. EXT... read
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