The family goes out for Dad's birthday. The place is packed and people keep coming in but no one leaves.
I'm a happily married father of two. I love reading, music and video games. I have been writing stories on and off since I was a kid. I've had virtually no schooling for creative writing so I am learning as I go....
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I'm a happily married father of two. I love reading, music and video games. I have been writing stories on and off since I was a kid. I've had virtually no schooling for creative writing so I am learning as I go. My goal is to be a novelist. My favorite writers include: Rod Serling, Stephen King, Richard Matheson and George Stark ;). I have posted some of my stories on my blog http://shapuhi.blogspot.com/ Check it out!
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Reviews by Shapuhi 13
A review of Void Touchersby Shapuhi on 06/21/2012I really liked this story. It was creepy in all the right places. It had twists that although weren't exactly surprising they were very satisfying. I may go back and re-read it to see if there were any clues in the begining that would hint to the outcome. The dialog was well written and flowed well throughout except when the doctor was talking to the captain. The "umms"... read
A review of Not My Secret to Tellby Shapuhi on 06/19/2012I'm not well educated in my chosen craft so when I review I leave the technical stuff to those better qualified. What I do is tell what I like, don't like and what I want more of. I like this story. The characters are well crafted with the one exception of Danny, he seems a little thin. Mr. Hunt sure seems like a crafty devil, I like him. I was a little lost on the couples... read
A review of Baker Streetby Shapuhi on 05/07/2012This story is great! I love the fact that this guy is so happy go lucky and is just trying to do the right thing by offering help to a stranger. SPOILER ALERT! The flesh eating babies are awesome it's great how they just seem to come out of the woodwork and claim there next victim. The end is very 'Twilight Zone' with it's seemingly endless cycle of similar victims. This was... read