Shapuhi 

member since 03/13/2009 | last login 07/13/2014

I'm a happily married father of two. I love reading, music and video games. I have been writing stories on and off since I was a kid. I've had virtually no schooling for creative writing so I am learning as I go....

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I'm a happily married father of two. I love reading, music and video games. I have been writing stories on and off since I was a kid. I've had virtually no schooling for creative writing so I am learning as I go. My goal is to be a novelist. My favorite writers include: Rod Serling, Stephen King, Richard Matheson and George Stark ;). I have posted some of my stories on my blog http://shapuhi.blogspot.com/ Check it out!

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Reviews by Shapuhi 13

  • A review of Void Touchers
    by Shapuhi on 06/21/2012
    I really liked this story. It was creepy in all the right places. It had twists that although weren't exactly surprising they were very satisfying. I may go back and re-read it to see if there were any clues in the begining that would hint to the outcome. The dialog was well written and flowed well throughout except when the doctor was talking to the captain. The "umms"... read
  • A review of Not My Secret to Tell
    by Shapuhi on 06/19/2012
    I'm not well educated in my chosen craft so when I review I leave the technical stuff to those better qualified. What I do is tell what I like, don't like and what I want more of. I like this story. The characters are well crafted with the one exception of Danny, he seems a little thin. Mr. Hunt sure seems like a crafty devil, I like him. I was a little lost on the couples... read
  • A review of Baker Street
    by Shapuhi on 05/07/2012
    This story is great! I love the fact that this guy is so happy go lucky and is just trying to do the right thing by offering help to a stranger. SPOILER ALERT! The flesh eating babies are awesome it's great how they just seem to come out of the woodwork and claim there next victim. The end is very 'Twilight Zone' with it's seemingly endless cycle of similar victims. This was... read
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Comments About Shapuhi 6

  • karlasbryant on 06/20/2012

    Thanks very much for your positive review of my short story, "Not My Secret To Tell". I'm very glad you liked it and I agree that it could be better if I developed it into a larger piece.

    Karla
  • Mike Wolfson on 05/07/2012

    Hi Shapuhi, Many thanks for the kind review of Hello! I'm glad you liked it. Good luck with your story "Sympathy".

    All the best,

    Mike
  • Tripsheet Revision on 02/27/2012

    Thanks for reading and reviewing Green Twister. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and I appreciate your positive comments. I look forward to reading your stories onsite. Tom
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