Reviews of Corporate Instructional Video #2 74

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  Kind of Funny
  A review of Corporate Instructional Video #2
  by TCARTER on 06/03/2005
  I work in a corporate office setting myself, so I can relate to this little video. It is quite funny - the whole concept of bathroom etiquette. I mean, we go to the bathroom to take a dump, but we try to devise some type of etiquette to deal with the down-right nastiness of it all. Nice camera work - good acting, and a very funny concept. Keep up the good work!!!... I work in a corporate office setting myself, so I can relate to this little video.
  
  It is quite funny - the whole concept of bathroom etiquette. I mean, we go to the bathroom to take a dump, but we try to devise some type of etiquette to deal with the down-right nastiness of it all.
  
  Nice camera work - good acting, and a very funny concept.
  
  Keep up the good work!!! read
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  This film is fine! An excellent use of comedy!
  A review of Corporate Instructional Video #2
  by InfoUp on 03/27/2005
  This is of course something we can all relate to, and enjoy! Very very funny, especially for anyone who has actually seen a corporate video, and knows what they are like. Basically this short film was flawless, from what i can tell. I am glad to hear it has recieved some recognition, best of luck with future projects!
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  Office charms
  A review of Corporate Instructional Video #2
  by frank molino on 03/02/2005
  Tight and well-executed little film whose understated humour does not exceed the potential of the idea on which it is based. Acoustic guitar does not quite fit the concept of an instructional video and the speaker's voice should have been more firm. But these are just minor details and the overall impression is positive.
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  Dry toilet humor
  A review of Corporate Instructional Video #2
  by TheGLK on 12/20/2004
  Not the first mock corporate instructional video I've seen on this site, but it had it's good points. The comedy was very dry and subtle, which I think is good for this genre. If you had started with something serious and then suddenly jumped into the mockery, it probably would have been much funnier. Even still, the five rules were humorous only the escape scenario used was... Not the first mock corporate instructional video I've seen on this site, but it had it's good points. The comedy was very dry and subtle, which I think is good for this genre. If you had started with something serious and then suddenly jumped into the mockery, it probably would have been much funnier. Even still, the five rules were humorous only the escape scenario used was futile since, if you and another person waited until you were the only one in the restroom, you would have to wait forever. Maybe that was intentional... The filming aspect of the short was top notch. The angles were well placed and the lighting very natural. The narrator, with his slight accent, added to the overall humor. Oh, and I'd be careful with the titling of your pieces; someone not paying attention might think your film was a continuation and report it to the HOJ. read
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  Great Film
  A review of Corporate Instructional Video #2
  by dmcintyre on 12/09/2004
  The film was well done overall. Great narration, well filmed, and the actor's expressions were well done. I think it was well written and thought out. It is one of those things where there are some unwritten rules that seem to be followed and it is funny, because when it is formalized one realizes the the silliness of it all. Kind of like the unwritten rule that everyone... The film was well done overall. Great narration, well filmed, and the actor's expressions were well done. I think it was well written and thought out. It is one of those things where there are some unwritten rules that seem to be followed and it is funny, because when it is formalized one realizes the the silliness of it all. Kind of like the unwritten rule that everyone stops a conversation when on an elevator if someone they don't know gets on the elevator. read
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  Potty etiquette in the workplace!
  A review of Corporate Instructional Video #2
  by SeaMowse on 12/01/2004
  And this goes for the ladies too! Ohh... this is so true and although I've never seen it as part of an instructional video, there is a silent rule when it comes to restroom activities in the corporate world. Very funny film! I liked your camerawork. Nicely done. The audio was a bit low, but you did mention that the internet version might not come across as strongly - audio... And this goes for the ladies too! Ohh... this is so true and although I've never seen it as part of an instructional video, there is a silent rule when it comes to restroom activities in the corporate world. Very funny film! I liked your camerawork. Nicely done. The audio was a bit low, but you did mention that the internet version might not come across as strongly - audio wise. All in all, a very funny, clever piece that is very well done. Thanks for the view! read
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  Those Instructive Videos
  A review of Corporate Instructional Video #2
  by matteo prezioso on 11/30/2004
  Not bad, but left me sort of cold feet in the end. The idea which this short was based on was a good one, it was the day it was delivered that did not entirely convinced me. I felt a bit disconnected by the 'audios' of this short, i.e. the voice over and the music (looped till I couldn't take it any longer) Camera work and ediiting were ok, but some extra lighting (just a dedo...)... Not bad, but left me sort of cold feet in the end. The idea which this short was based on was a good one, it was the day it was delivered that did not entirely convinced me. I felt a bit disconnected by the 'audios' of this short, i.e. the voice over and the music (looped till I couldn't take it any longer) Camera work and ediiting were ok, but some extra lighting (just a dedo...) would have helped enourmously. Acting was good, the guy was cool. Best of luck! read
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  Bathroom humor
  A review of Corporate Instructional Video #2
  by Imaginationmachine on 11/05/2004
  This was a very good how to use the bathroom film. The voice over work was done perfect for this film. I liked the use of the text as a reminder and a list. The acting was good, and the camera work was done very well. Overall I like it very much and though it could make a good public service anouncement. Id give it a 7 out of 10.
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  Where's the comdey?
  A review of Corporate Instructional Video #2
  by tallorderfilms on 10/12/2004
  I thought this was well put together little film. The camera work was good, the lighting was good and the editing was good. It looked like a coporate video. The only problem I had was that I didn't find it very funny. There were a few situations, that were ripe for laughter, but they fell flat. Now in the production notes it says that the sound effects are too subtle. This... I thought this was well put together little film. The camera work was good, the lighting was good and the editing was good. It looked like a coporate video. The only problem I had was that I didn't find it very funny. There were a few situations, that were ripe for laughter, but they fell flat. Now in the production notes it says that the sound effects are too subtle. This is true. Maybe you should try making them louder for the site. It might make all the difference. read
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  I didn't find it funny.
  A review of Corporate Instructional Video #2
  by writerguy on 09/20/2004
  I like the idea of a mock corporate instructional video - it's filled with comedic potential. To be honest, I didn't laugh once during this short film, but everyone has a different sense of humor. In terms of the production, I thought the shots were well-chosen and the audio was done well. I'd be interested in seeing more segments of this corporate instructional video.